Clash Of The Gods: Big Ending/Beginning of Existence

[MonuMental]

Gods clash for aeons with wrath massing blackened chaos,
Slashes in time, snatching the back half of space off,
The light would blast a face off in a suicide seance,
To behold the negations of their soon to die creations,
It's a paradox like no tocks from two pairs of clocks,
When terror locks it's chops onto the very air it docks,
Dimensions rock and reverberate with a shattering of ages,
Devour sages and fools from the pages of living phases,
Ain't no laments when existence is nothing, a derivation,
Equations locked in the brains of the greatest of races,
Our destinations are resignation, seeing desecration,
Of education, our designation being eventual decimation,
Caught in the crossfire of multidimensional entities,
Whose labeled identities conflicted with men's beliefs,
Sins that eat the holy sheep to gather the golden fleece,
As we battle with leviathans breaching the open seas,
The prominence astronomical when thunder by bottles full,
Throttles fools, raining mortar to topple their particles,
Unstoppable destruction on a scale that's phenomenal,
The proximal force of arsenals too low to be audible,
The sun is blotted in full and as the temperature drops,
Energy crops the universe from metaphysical spots,
Visuals stop, all existence quivers in pivotal shock,
Subliminals rot time and focus unequivocal knocks,
All at once comes end to the clash, in smoke and ash,
The all in one is sending images back, to cut and graft,
Reconstruct the cover that hovers over oblivion's eyes,
Chameleon like, just other extents of sentient minds.

My activity has been spotty, as of late. I will return with complete and utter lyrical devastation as soon as I'm out of this writer's block. Till then, enjoy this latest piece of mine.

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[Enlightend]

While reading this I felt as if each bar did its own thing and yet they came together very nicely to form an intelligent piece of work with huge... almost too much... vocabulary.. but with the smoothness of the flow and the unbelievable imagery... the vocab worked... so good piece.. and keep um coming

[CBK]

wow vocab was incredible flow was lethal aswell considering the length of the multi syllabical lines.

dope complex rhymes right there and a joy to read even if 84% of it was over my head. keep em coming mental.


The sun is blotted in full and as the temperature drops,
Energy crops the universe from metaphysical spots,
Visuals stop, all existence quivers in pivotal shock,
Subliminals rot time and focus unequivocal knocks


the smoothness of these bars is epic.

[Kuhlerblynd]

Hope you dont mind my little breakdown here...

Gods clash for aeons with wrath massing blackened chaos,
Slashes in time, snatching the back half of space off,
The light would blast a face off in a suicide seance,
To behold the negations of their soon to die creations,

Dude, the opening line grabbed my attention nicely. Your vocabualry here is amazing, and the flow is on point. Fucking deep shit here too.

It's a paradox like no tocks from two pairs of clocks,
When terror locks it's chops onto the very air it docks,
Dimensions rock and reverberate with a shattering of ages,
Devour sages and fools from the pages of living phases,

The metaphors here are just crazy man, and you keep everything going that I had stated above.

Ain't no laments when existence is nothing, a derivation,
Equations locked in the brains of the greatest of races,
Our destinations are resignation, seeing desecration,
Of education, our designation being eventual decimation,

This is some of the truest shit I have ever read! Line for line!

Caught in the crossfire of multidimensional entities,
Whose labeled identities conflicted with men's beliefs,
Sins that eat the holy sheep to gather the golden fleece,
As we battle with leviathans breaching the open seas,

I would have the same comment for this as I did for the second comment I made earlier.

The prominence astronomical when thunder by bottles full,
Throttles fools, raining mortar to topple their particles,
Unstoppable destruction on a scale that's phenomenal,
The proximal force of arsenals too low to be audible,

Wow, and deeper the rabbit hole goes. While you are using alot of metaphors that can be taken alot of ways, Im beginning to feel this piece is more about self-destruction, and how man basically destroys himself. But please, correct meif I am wrong.

The sun is blotted in full and as the temperature drops,
Energy crops the universe from metaphysical spots,
Visuals stop, all existence quivers in pivotal shock,
Subliminals rot time and focus unequivocal knocks,

And as I read, this is what I imagine to be the emotion mother nature and the havens, and space itself, would feel after such destruction and choas would finally come to an end.

All at once comes end to the clash, in smoke and ash,
The all in one is sending images back, to cut and graft,
Reconstruct the cover that hovers over oblivion's eyes,
Chameleon like, just other extents of sentient minds.

Fantasic finish to the piece. I feel you wrapped this up nicely. My friend, your talent never ceases to intrigue me as a reader, and this is another piece of yours that I feel should be nominated to the classics section. Very, very nicely done!

[QwarterZ]

this was niiiiiiiiiiiice Im digging the flow and the usage of multis in this piece it was weaved together nicely and it kept moving the whole time it was a smooth piece my dude...you really did your thing...what can I say...keep it up dude..cant wait for your next drop

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[88SkyLink]

Shit .. they all said it for me. Vocab on point, not going overboard with ya diction, structured pretty well, nice flow to it, and a really creative piece overall. Keep it up man

[Borat]

Literally amazing.

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