MOVE ON (RNB)

Slicka · Post by **Slicka** » Wed Oct 05, 2011 1:40 pm

sorry bout being gone so long fellas just been busy...but it finna show on this! finally got my pro tools masterd!

Jeyvon · Post by **Jeyvon** » Wed Oct 05, 2011 2:41 pm

I like the smooth sound the messages is good I would like to freestyle on it

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Thu Oct 06, 2011 2:35 am

yeah i like this song man... i can relate to this shit.... hooks really nice... first verse kinda iffy... you sound nervous bro... have confidence in the verse... second verse was much better... bridge was nice too... overall man good shit... i'd bump this track man... keep it up bro...

blindeyeent · Post by **blindeyeent** » Mon Oct 10, 2011 2:26 am

first verse:
flow is aight sounds more like your reading it and losing breath and pushing the words... lyrics are true and from the heart i like that about this song and was the hook already on this beat? cuz it's dope...

second verse: WAYYY better than the first verse flow is ON POINT lyrics are perfect.. energy is on point... keep that shit poppin bro

hook is redick who is this?

only thing bad i can say is the first verse seems like you are kinda unsure about your words or flow... go in that booth with confidence bro

overall 8/10 hope to hear more from ya

PZ!

TreTru · Post by **TreTru** » Mon Oct 10, 2011 6:47 am

hmm this beat was coo my dude..

hmm you always bring a real approach i can respect that..str8 forward.deliv is coo lyrics fit the concept

is this your Homey on the Hook..Jig Got chops...Hook is fire imo..

yeah it sounds like ya quality/mixxin is a bit better ..not bad

Yeah My Dude this right here is a Niiice Radio Friendly Track...Props

wow way to step it up bro

Slicka · Post by **Slicka** » Tue Oct 11, 2011 3:12 am

Appreciate all the feed fellas. and yeah
Chirs lee aka tooney is on the hook and verse 2. hes the newest edition to the crew i been building. An yeah i was reading it off paper^ lol...... but thanks im going to start getting active im going to leave comments on yal audio later on today/tonight!

Cyan · Post by **Cyan** » Sat Oct 15, 2011 2:49 am

The acoustic is mixed in really nice ... very fluffy and poppy. The beat is nice. I have to agree with the other guys that first verse comes across forced. Seems like you have a great ear for a beat ... remember to use the same for your delivery ... don't try to like what you're doing ... instead ... find shit you don't like about it ... play it back ... find 5 spots that you wanna improve and slowly work your way through em with repetition .. and if that doesn't work - change the writing ... Dude on second verse was nice ... and the RnB elements were handled and recorded well.

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Sat Oct 15, 2011 3:37 am

if it helps, just from my personal experience, memorizing your lyrics before recording as if you already recorded a dozen times, will make you more comfortable when spittin it, track was koo though, hook and 2nd verse were dope just gotta match it

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