My Thoughts

[Defiance]

let me take you on a journey



enter my mind..

thoughts travel at the speed of light
my imagination gives me wings for flight
ideas manifest into the seeds of life
cuttin rhymes with out a need of knives
i talk myself up and believe the hype
my mental is suspensful a free delight
thinking is measured by my thoughts inside
i keep it real as the fake is tossed aside
at times it gets twisted til the knots untied
i reflect on past times i could of lost my life
and smile for a while and jus rock the ride
keep it moving happy just to monopolize
on the things that i hold dear to me
an the bad things that i alwayz fear to be
my life is a mess the path isnt clear to me
sometimes i feel mute with no one hearin me
but still i speak knowing this is what i have
hip hop thoughts breach an its such a blast
i was a bad person but man fuck the past
looking foward to the future as i touch the grass
sometimes my minds racing with no breaks to hit
sometimes i feel down like i cant take this shit
but i always look up giving thanks for it
cause even when im down i know i make it shift
my mind is mine and no one else controls me
thats why i take life as its just unfold-ing
a mental juggernaut not a soul can hold me
thats why im smiling thanking those before me

[CBK]

dope. simple but effective rhyme scheme, flawless flow thru out ,no real subject/topic but it was just good quality self expression. Good post man

[QwarterZ]

This was nice...it cuts to the chase pretty nicely..the vibe is smooooooth
and the lyrics flow together nicely..I'm digging all you did on this
I woulda liked to see a more indepth analysis though...on ur thoughts that is
either way keep up the good work my dude

[Orfadox]

As Q Said Would Of Been Nice To See An In Depth View On This But It Wa A Nice Drop None The Less

[Shawnmd]

I think this post flowed very well, though the post doesnt have a specific subject. Still dope though.

[Felon]

thoughts travel at the speed of light
my imagination gives me wings for flight
ideas manifest into the seeds of life
cuttin rhymes with out a need of knives

Good Opener, Flows well..

i was a bad person but man fuck the past
looking foward to the future as i touch the grass

Hard..

Nice verse...solid..your lyrics are deep!! are you writing bars to record or just letting ya mind go for idea's????

[Defiance]

more or less i just write to write