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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tFsn8pCV ... re=related[/video]


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Who am I to believe in eyesight or if the time's right
basis is process of elemination based on the limelight
once your image is based on hindsight and the right vibe
theres a nice wife, fly type apparently off of priceline
who manipulates the chips like she aced computer class
sure you'll find a cuter ass thinking bout what you'd do to that
but if you review the facts and see who saw u bummy stayed true to that
who ain't consumed to cash but kept a mellow head ur due to that
sometimes your blinded and can't see through the wrong types
get ur credit just to max em' just because shes in the thong riiiight
who am I to judge on a long night, too many shows limo's parked by
waiting like the end of prom night even that got a scary sequel
you could either lose your equal or even misplace your seed too..
everything you say becomes see through, marriage loses it's meaning
while your scheming on the next step while she's steady dreaming
what an eventful evening caught up in the midnight sky..believe it
lust hit's two different ways when your in it's concievement
so while your steady tryna scheme on life and mix your words up
sippin' on syr-up smoking that mary looking for shit to stir up
nothing can really equal up to the feeling of who was your first love




....I'm almost back in my zone people
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Read both of your recent drops. The other on was dope on the schemes, dope on the beat, but not reall y I's style. This here though is fairly solid. Nice smooth beat, smooth lyrics, flowed well off of first read which is sometimes impossible. Shit dope man, i liked this one, the crossovers were nicely penned as well. Stop being a stranger fool.
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I pretty much agree with Panda on the finer points of this piece. It flowed slicker than owl shit and it was an enjoyable little read. We see you gettin back in the zone. Rest assured that whatever you post I'll feed, so also in the words of Panda, quit being a stranger.
what an eventful evening caught up in the midnight sky..believe it
lust hit's two different ways when your in it's concievement
so while your steady tryna scheme on life and mix your words up
sippin' on syr-up smoking that mary looking for shit to stir up
nothing can really equal up to the feeling of who was your first love
Nice shit, right here.
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nice qwarters
i was wondering if you were still arround this site

enjoyed the drop flowed well with the beat when i rapped it

like the multi usage and the picture painting you did. ill as ever

keep dropping homie
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Thank you homeboys and homegirls
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