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MonuMental - Waiting

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Re: MonuMental - Waiting

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damn, that intro kicked in, in such a dope way, nice beat, real talk lyrics, i always liking something thats true, allows me to connect with the song, but the hook was the main thing in this track, good stuff, i liked it
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BUMP THIS FUCKING TRACK MENuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuUUUUUUUUUU
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im diggin the song mane. the hook was my favorite part. im liking the concept as well. keep it pushin
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I know I left feed on this already, but shit!!!!!! I love this fuckin song!!!!

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Lol, thanks again, guys. I really appreciate it.
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Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

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Re: MonuMental - Waiting

Post by Defiance »

yo that was tight good qaulity on the verses and good subject content.. really feeling the chorus, except that it was a bit fuzzy. nothing a lil tweaking wouldnt fix

but i like your content man really good

keep um coming
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Post by CBK »

this is the first of your audio that i've clocked dude .... wow thanks for this man i aint got no right to try an give criticism but i think the flow is just a lil bit to slow for this track just my opinion tho man....

beat is well made an produced,
lyrics well written as always expected with you.
vocals are crisp an clear with relevant vocab an emotional delivery.

ILL MONU !!!!!!!
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quality isn't too bad the hoook you couls have turned down the lows a little to mes it better lyrics are very well written and expresses the song very well good job keep it up bro
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