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QwarterZ
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Mission

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My higher meaning, my muse, that has my wires meeting
my tires screeching, as I pull out, another night..
Hi! I been meaning to give you a call but my grind is peaking
and at times I find myself struggling to try and breathe and...
my minds misleading, it says "I love you" but at times the meaning...
is lost between the position I hold, stress and untimely reasons
so if I seem a little irritated, then I'm just near the basics
the basics that make a man a man, so don't ever fear replacement
because those three words I utter may just adhere a statement
this year I'm chasing a new lifestyle, so lets get this straight
though I got love for you, your gonna have to witness a sideline
because the constant attention you need really doesn't fit in with my time
and maybe that could be my downfall, whether it is or isn't
with this miss I'm missin', the lifestyle that I lived a minute
but I can never confess to music correctly until I fix what's missin'......
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Man, this shit was smooth as hell with the flow. I mean slick as owl shit. Some shit I could vibe out to high as hell. You got some great pieces that deserve more attention, my guy. Here's to hoping that more people start feeding. Respect.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

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Re: Mission

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Man, about halfway through, i was like AH, HOW SWEET. Then you said sideline the bitch, like whoa lol. Nah man, it was a pretty good read. Not the best ive read from you but definitly worth a read. I didnt read it to the beat (im at work) but the flow seemed off at times, like one line was nasty with the doubles then the next felt like a run on sentence due to the lack there of. Other than that, kudos man.
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