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ME-KISH' BACK!!!

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Just a quick keystyle since I know its been a while...

Gettin my dick sucked by a thick slut in the parking lot of glitz/
I'll nut on her b-cups and hand her a comb so she can pick my pubes off her tits/
I know its explicit, but its only as sick as the mole on my ex bitch armpits/
I'm fly as a yardstick, high as a face-lift, and I can barely see the keys through my eyelids low slits/
... well that's it, sorry for the wait Illest :P

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Post by Kuhlerblynd »

Some of your multi's are off a little. WHile the structure seems kind of off, your flow is in tact very well for most of this. Wish you would have written more though so I could break it down better haha. Its good to see you back on site man, and hope you stick around and drop more material.
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Lol, hard to really feed on a keystyle, especially one of this length, but I'll say that I bet if you sat down and put thought and time into a piece it'd come out snappin. So do that, fool. Lol.
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You damn sand bagger

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coulda been better...and some major work....lol
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