Welcome to Illest Lyrics forum established in 2005.
----
Free Vapes

Theories of Distruction Part I

Drop your written rhymes in one of the largest collections of original rhymes on the internet. The feedback in our Written Rhymes section will simply amaze you.

Moderators: Loon E Lou, Enlightend

User avatar
~Symbolikull~
Rhyme Dominator
Offline
Posts: 2799
Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
Wins: 37
Losses: 16

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx Haz im get to our battle right now.... but yeah thats what i thought, ill imagery, substance and vocab, not to sound conceded but i liked it....
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
Haz
Supreme Lyricist
Offline
Posts: 6800
Joined: Mon Dec 18, 2006 1:41 am
Wins: 67
Losses: 70
Location: The Port

Post by Haz »

ill imagery<<< Word This Painted a Picture
Theories Of Destruction Fit it Fine....
Image
User avatar
Ambiguous Realm
Army Of Three
Offline
Posts: 3522
Joined: Sun Jan 15, 2006 3:57 pm
Wins: 46
Losses: 14
No Shows: 2
Location: Earth

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

i didn't care about the last line too much becuz it was kinda obvious it wasn't completely finished
Image
User avatar
~Symbolikull~
Rhyme Dominator
Offline
Posts: 2799
Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
Wins: 37
Losses: 16

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

i feel yuh bro, we all have our opinions, and i respect your feed back no matter what you say.
i take it all as constructive criticism.
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
User avatar
16 Micz
Disciple Of Rap.
Offline
Posts: 2446
Joined: Sat Jan 14, 2006 4:37 pm
Wins: 16
Losses: 6

Post by 16 Micz »

pretty dope, it wasnt all that good because its pretty simpel and easy to rhyme those words but u made it flow and structured it dope which made this dope, the multies vocab and rhyming was nice keep it up

fav lines:Hurt MC's wit Pencils Purposely, that Lead to a Cursed Agility,
Humanity and its Stenciled Durability cant handle Tension bein Pulled Vertically,
Inspect the Census Thoroughly, I advance thru Telekenetic Maturity,
We've been Accustomed to Fall, by believing in Justice by Law,
User avatar
~Symbolikull~
Rhyme Dominator
Offline
Posts: 2799
Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
Wins: 37
Losses: 16

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

gracias 16Micz
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
User avatar
Lawgix
The Aphilliated Assasin
Offline
Posts: 4214
Joined: Thu Sep 21, 2006 3:25 pm
Wins: 14
Losses: 8

Post by Lawgix »

thats a really good drop man... love the vocab... it was off the chain... everything was tight man... keep that shit up... that right there proves the potential i see in u... keep it up dun ur doin good...
Don't Let The Game Make U, Make Urself

Lawgix

Illest Radio

Image

"Sometimes You Gotta Stand By Your Failures To Recognize Your Success" Joe Budden

pest wrote:You look Easy... Whats Good?
AntiMaTTer wrote:lmao ...is this how you hit on all the chicks?
User avatar
~Symbolikull~
Rhyme Dominator
Offline
Posts: 2799
Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
Wins: 37
Losses: 16

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx homie, appreciate it

feelin the 21 love
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
Post Reply

Return to “Written Rhymes”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 7 guests