proverb vs P_A(closed no wins no losses)

[plague_arsonist]

4-6 no rule except no recycling verb can hit it first but this my check in

[Proverb]

check check 1 2 1 2

[plague_arsonist]

see ima try sum new cuz i realize with gun lines i seem to be gifted/
i grab a scope or two and aim it at u grab the chearleader clip get ya spirits lifted

to be honest if u want a actual chance to beat me yo gonna have to go thru havoc do some shit rattle me/
im talking bend reality defy gravity pull of a hadoken sonic boom and a lui kang fatality to be considered a threat when u battle me


ima put the shotty to his body have a third of em left like a fraction/
you can say i deleted verb from his name the way i put him out of action


ur name is false advertisement and honestly i find it absurd/
ur not a vet and u aint bout that action ur no PRO-VERB

so now that im done pouncin u in my rhyme/
be lucky i aint pull a anti move and kill u in nine

[Proverb]

you must be pretty cool to say the same line twice/
you even used arvs line against me again haha nice/
your awesome man when you can copy and paste/
your an arsonist well i spitfire that could dry lakes/
think your spits the shit but your about to witness/
my legit quick wit is the antidote for this sickness/
with the quickness and relentless your situations dire/
the only thing of you on fire is ya body under my tires/
you think your a plague well i got ya some medicine/
i dont mean to be vague but ima veteran with this excederin/

[Arvincible]

4-6 no rule except no recycling verb can hit it first but this my check in

lmao at no recycling then u use my line hahah


anyways

punches - proverb, more consistent throughout the diss although u did flip his verse p_a states no rules.. smh
personals - proverb there you go u can use his name or his past battles as personals if you dont know much about him.
flow - plague_arsonist that hadouken line was nice actually lol

this battle was obviously too quick of a type up for both of you, i suggest you both take more time on r shit if neither of you like to lose.


mvgt : proverb

[Blake Downs]

see ima try sum new cuz i realize with gun lines i seem to be gifted/
i grab a scope or two and aim it at u grab the chearleader clip get ya spirits lifted
(this bar was a bit stretched,the punch was a no,and the flow was ok)

to be honest if u want a actual chance to beat me yo gonna have to go thru havoc do some shit rattle me/
im talking bend reality defy gravity pull of a hadoken sonic boom and a lui kang fatality to be considered a threat when u battle me
(i hate stretched bars,the multi was ok,the punch wasnt too strong)

ima put the shotty to his body have a third of em left like a fraction/
you can say i deleted verb from his name the way i put him out of action
(the flow was there but the punch just didnt seem solid)

ur name is false advertisement and honestly i find it absurd/
ur not a vet and u aint bout that action ur no PRO-VERB
(the flow is still there,and you are attempting nameplay and a personal)

so now that im done pouncin u in my rhyme/
be lucky i aint pull a anti move and kill u in nine
(the rhyme was there,i didnt like this ender,and the punch wasnt strong)

vs

you must be pretty cool to say the same line twice/
you even used arvs line against me again haha nice/
(flow was there,decent personal,decent punch)

your awesome man when you can copy and paste/
your an arsonist well i spitfire that could dry lakes/
(the flow was there,the punch was ok,a bit too much self boasting)

think your spits the shit but your about to witness/
my legit quick wit is the antidote for this sickness/
(the flow was tight,you should use multies,punch was ight,a bit of self boasting again lol)

with the quickness and relentless your situations dire/
the only thing of you on fire is ya body under my tires/
(flows was there,the punch was decent)

you think your a plague well i got ya some medicine/
i dont mean to be vague but ima veteran with this excederin/
(decent nameplay,a bit of self boasting still but the punch was ight)

this battle was ight,proverb you could use more multies,nameplay,wordplay,i see you getting at it though,and you dont want to always rap your bars about your self alot when battling,thats what im saying when i talk about self boasting,but other than that you got some punches and p-a you need to shorten some bars use less fillers,use more multies,wordplay,punches,but yeah i think proverb got this for being more consistent with punches,flows,not making long ass bars,and just overall entertainment,
MVGT PROVERB

MVGT : proverb

[Frank Black]

PA

see ima try sum new cuz i realize with gun lines i seem to be gifted/
i grab a scope or two and aim it at u grab the chearleader clip get ya spirits lifted
ayyy nice opener i digg this 4/5
to be honest if u want a actual chance to beat me yo gonna have to go thru havoc do some shit rattle me/
im talking bend reality defy gravity pull of a hadoken sonic boom and a lui kang fatality to be considered a threat when u battle me
kinda a filler nice meta type ish tho more like simile tho.
2/5

ima put the shotty to his body have a third of em left like a fraction/
you can say i deleted verb from his name the way i put him out of action
niceee 4/5
ur name is false advertisement and honestly i find it absurd/
ur not a vet and u aint bout that action ur no PRO-VERB
nah 0/5

so now that im done pouncin u in my rhyme/
be lucky i aint pull a anti move and kill u in nine
boo bad filer nice try tho 1/5

12/25

PROVERB
you must be pretty cool to say the same line twice/
you even used arvs line against me again haha nice/
idk really no much soo... 2/5
your awesome man when you can copy and paste/
your an arsonist well i spitfire that could dry lakes/
filler 1/5think your spits the shit but your about to witness/
my legit quick wit is the antidote for this sickness/
filler 1/5with the quickness and relentless your situations dire/
the only thing of you on fire is ya body under my tires/
better than the last 2/5you think your a plague well i got ya some medicine/
i dont mean to be vague but ima veteran with this excederin/
no 0/5


6/25

pretty much a one-sided battle PV verse wasnt the best but got the job done had some nice lines in there got the point.

Proverb you need some work man you shouldve provided a link on ya first bar because not everyone may no wdf you talkin bout you wasn't directing nothing at him either maybe in a face 2 face rap battle you wouldve won in the FLOW catagory buh not in text nice try tho good battle.

LANDSLIDE - PV

-- 22 Aug 2011 06:22 --

edit i mean PV.

[Alvin]

I misread Franks vote, i was confused by this:

LANDSLIDE - PV

-- 22 Aug 2011 06:22 --

edit i mean PV.

but by his scoring, he meant to vote for P A.


Open for votes, 2-1

[Tha Dark Prince]

Punches: Plague coz I honestly don't see how pro could win this category there wern't really any punches or they were too weak to me, plague didn't have anything great but had some clever ones here n there
Flow:tie | pro came with an ok flow and plague came with more than that but a few parts threw me off
Personals:Tie both had the same amount of personals and name attacks, plague had that anti line and pro had that arvs line to match
Multis:plague scrapes this because had a lil basic inner multis on that 2nd bar, pro didn't have any proper ones to my knowledge
Enjoyment:Tie nothing outstanding I know both battlers could do way better than that, but decent battle overall


MVGT: Plague_arsonist

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[88SkyLink]

Well .. I think that this was a decent battle. I think that PA won .. He had the better punches, decent but flow forced and some multis in 'em. Proverb also had decent lines .. but these lines pretty much won PA the match

"you can say i deleted verb from his name the way i put him out of action
"

"i grab a scope or two and aim it at u grab the chearleader clip get ya spirits lifted"

They stood out for me for some wierd reason.

As for Proverb .. You had some good lines aswell .. and prolly the better flow, but I don't think you had ENOUGH to beat Plague Arsonist.

All in all a decent battle .. But MVGT - Plague Arsonist

[Mitty]

PLAGUE
see ima try sum new cuz i realize with gun lines i seem to be gifted/
i grab a scope or two and aim it at u grab the chearleader clip get ya spirits lifted
(I think this line would sound better if it was "clip ya spirits get lifted" other than that it sounds stretched and the flow was ok)

to be honest if u want a actual chance to beat me yo gonna have to go thru havoc do some shit rattle me/
im talking bend reality defy gravity pull of a hadoken sonic boom and a lui kang fatality to be considered a threat when u battle me
(Really long lines make your structure hard to follow, I see some multies in there, punch wasn't)

ima put the shotty to his body have a third of em left like a fraction/
you can say i deleted verb from his name the way i put him out of action
[I think I get where you are going with this "you are a pro (when you delte VERB from his name) the way you put him outta ACTION. Flow was basic punch is ok now that I get it]

ur name is false advertisement and honestly i find it absurd/
ur not a vet and u aint bout that action ur no PRO-VERB
(This bar rhymes in the middle and at the end with no real punch and weak nameplay)

so now that im done pouncin u in my rhyme/
be lucky i aint pull a anti move and kill u in nine
(You ARE rhyming and attempting for some nameplay and personals if I could even call them that at this point they are weak, but you will get better)

PROVERB
you must be pretty cool to say the same line twice/
you even used arvs line against me again haha nice/
(Decent opener with decent flow decent personal)

your awesome man when you can copy and paste/
your an arsonist well i spitfire that could dry lakes/
(That last line ends too abruptly, decent flow once again and with the personal. Try to find something else to attack about though it gets old quick)

think your spits the shit but your about to witness/
my legit quick wit is the antidote for this sickness/
(Nice multies, decent flow but no punches. If you're gonna up yourself tie it in with why...not just that you are these lines can cost you a battle sometimes they almost seem pointless)

with the quickness and relentless your situations dire/
the only thing of you on fire is ya body under my tires/
(Punch was weak flow was decent because it rhymed)

you think your a plague well i got ya some medicine/
i dont mean to be vague but ima veteran with this excederin/
(Flow was decent nameplay was there punch was ok but kinda played)

FLOW-Tie
PUNCHES-Proverb
MULTIES-Plague
NAMEPLAY-Tie
PERSONALs-Proverb

Pretty close battle in my eyes...structure made the difference. MVGT:Proverb

[Alvin]

VOTES

[Loon E Lou]

Need another voted on this or it WILL be closed with no wins or losses

-- Thu Sep 08, 2011 7:50 am --

Closed with no wins or losses