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Defiance
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lyrical finesse

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i go in it to win it.. like losing was not an option
no caution.. I'm popping off when y'all are just stopping
cocking.. my fists my clips your bitch.. what you got a problem
nodding.. my dome to poems like holmes I'm fuckin awesome
lobbing.. these odd blends to mobb men I'm rushing and busting
hushing your husband.. than laughing as your huffing and puffing
punchin these dumb men.. people be like aint he something
witty and gritty.. from city to city like i don't pity you kitties
the big bad wolf, i live fast look! hot! i make learners give back books!
i leave big rats shook! and cig phat cush, looking at your girl.. i could dig that bush
and I'm not playing.. saying in laments that your buying an your paying
i make made men.. break to praying while laying on the pavement
from the basement to the space ship.. crazy making great scripts
take it.. or leave it, made of harsh achievements an a written grievance
yes i seize this.. and be ripped, always fully e-Quipped
i see shit in the mirrors, so I'm always shattering them frequent
a fuckin delinquent drinking 40s smoking drugs and Frying balls
making cuts with iron saws when I'm involved with my resolve
i tie my palms behind my back.. and rap harder than a slap
attack hacks stacked in a line that wraps half way round the back
i am that!! and a whole lot more, so don't ignore the silver sword
id kill the world... within a single word and call it civil war!!
and i know.. most of y'all will call this ignorant! done with diligence
saying y'all aint feeling it.. repealing it smoked like a cigarette
a bit intense.. but legitly bent.. cause this is just lyrical finesse
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This shit flowed smoother than an Ex-Lax smoothie out the back side of a newborn, bruh. For real. You snapped all the way through this piece, multies went crazy, and the flow was fucking impeccable. Props on this, bruh, as always. DOPE.
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dope, enjoyed the read... i dont remember the last i just wrote.. without an exact sense of direction with the rhymes, just goin and goin..this shit is always fun i might do this soon. good stuff man
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Damn man ... the flow just couldn't stop, had me going. This shit got the things required - multis were good, it got amazing flow and some decent punches. Nice shit

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