88SkyLink - Wickedest

[88SkyLink]

My rapping compared to yours is opposite, more or less parralel
Verbally too sweet for you, words covered with caramel
Sweeter than a honey, to all the bees, my apologies
But Im the teacher, yall just study Melissopalynology
You’re bars so agitated, my lyrics are well elaborated
You think you a ill rapper? consider yourself eradicated
By the bomb I be dropping, spitting constant uranium
Enough uranium to cause eternal damage to the cranium
Cuz I’m the Rap Scientist, use my victims as my analysis
Lyrically murder other rappers, causing cerebral paralysis
Man I spit way too many bars, that they cause incarceration
Showing a lil bit of sentence, just to harm the nation
Of haters and disbelievers, with excessive information
Containing metaphorical fire, I hope you got ya insulation
Now I'm on my 15th line, call it Buchanan, still spitting true cannons
Best not 'test' my 'sick mind', RIP to those who flue examine

[Ambiguous Realm]

nice vocab, this seemed proper, the rhymescheme could've been more advanced but the rhymes itself were cool, i'd avoid the same endings though.. too many "ations/ations" get old, and then.. "alysis/aylsis", the "ated/ated" same with "ranium/ranium" i mean otherwise there's not much else too it, just some advice... take it how u like, the piece in total was decent though

[Enlightend]

i thought this was OK.. vocab and flow was OK... not very complex lyrically but its still a good piece...

[Thu Hem]

Nice Vocab..... good flow
Keep @ it and try to to make it complex next tym.

[the sentinel]

Siick bruh...i really dig this!

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[Proverb]

Now I'm on my 15th line, call it Buchanan, still spitting true cannons
Best not 'test' my 'sick mind', RIP to those who flue examine

love them last 2 lines dope drop man keep em comin

[88SkyLink]

Thnx for the feedback...really appreciate it

[For Real]

Did you bite AOTP? Lmao only joking, but your style is so similar to theirs. I'm sure you get influence from them, as the addition of 'rap scientist' would be very coincidental otherwise.

Anyways, good drop with great vocab, a prefect blend of intelligence and readability. There was no real meaning to the topic, besides a brag drop, but that was what you felt like doing so I can't critisize anything about that. Good working.

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