im on that 6am shit

[Proverb]

I Drop rhymes Til infinity/
true I spit cynically/
read every verse critically/
and spit the truth religiously/
I'm one with the trinity, the master of divinity/
I remain blessed while obsessed with obscenity/
I'm the best in the vicinity, How I start initially/
I continue with simplicity, craft every line efficiently/
as I rock your mind deliberately/
My bars are the epitome of rapping an epiphany/
my rhymes penetrate til they decimate your girls virginity/
my lines are aimed at your face placed strategically/
Watch the sunlight shine bright over the oasis/
venture many places filled with friendly faces/
No unknown rivals alley ways filled wit crack vials/
no untouchables in denial hindering my survival/

[ScottJames]

up your rhyme game. cuz half those words didnt rhyme

[Thu Hem]

Agree with Scott..

[For Real]

Only one or two of them didnt rhyme to me, strategically and obscenity, but then again I am quite a slant rhymer myself and I think the flow can really cover up holes in the rhyming.

It is good, but what really got me was the last few lines. It just screamed that you had exusted the multie and couldent continue. If you are to keep going with the one line, finish with it, or extend the next rhyme further.

-- Fri Aug 26, 2011 7:22 pm --

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