Guitar FLowing

[Defiance]

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just a lil flow to a guitar rift my buddy laid down

[Loon E Lou]

yea man smooooooth ass guitar play on this. you came in kinda loud. vocals stood out to me from the beat too much. i think turnin em down a little would really mesh well with the beat since it doesnt have any kicks snares or anything. but thats jus the technical shit.

your flow was nice. i feel you flowed with the beat throuout. really have good energy on it. i almost wanna say i can see this bein performed at an open mic or sumtn. dope shit.

[Defiance]

thanks loon... upping this piece need some more feed please

[MonuMental]

Yo, man, this was really just dope. I do this myself, only I have noone else to play the guitar so I just spit while I play. Lol. It showed great flow, the presence was there and you snapped throughout, like Loon said, maybe just a tad bit too loud on the vocals , if you turned them down just a bit it'd give the guitar a little more presence and further accentuate the overall quality of the piece. Dope concept and execution, my friend. I look forward to more of this.

[Audible Thought]

This has a natural live sound to this, this could be a real nice song if you recorded and mixed the guitar, and then spit over it. I like these little drops you do though, i wish i knew how to play the guitar(Im learning) or someone that can play it. I would do the same thing lol.