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Defiance
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ART Collab

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Defiance-
Rappers seem lavish they dont know how gay they-bars-be
bitch made ass emcees that cant fuck with the A-R-T
i spray that hard speech fucking up they game plans
The Six of us Murderas rep ART like its a name brand
rappers stay bland While the academy is on a higher level
Raw talent... like we the illest!! while yall are just tired metals
we fire several shots pop lock and never settle for Second
we first place, on the worst day using our words as weapons
fools step in.. and get knocked by the Academy of Raw Talent
lyrical surgeons purging knocking their anatomy off BALANCE

Leeroi green-

talent increasing rapidly, you mad that we beasting savagely/
champions of the galaxy ART over ya head like we free of gravity/
Thee academy got a certain knack for words like de bergerac/
And be assured the flo progressive like we make insurance ads/
team incredible strength impeccable you suckas trash at best man/
we eleven fold better bro our upper class are fresh, man/
The hardest flows the difference between us and perfect is marginal/
As we start the show classic after classic bitches ART lebeau/

Rejiem Eom-

To put it simple I got a crew that could murk a lot of dudes
What it do ? you think you're fly then we're swatting you, plot a move
Pay attention bastards cause we're gonna blast the peeps
That doubt you need a 'work of ART' to create a masterpiece !
The Academy's outclassing and amassing rewards
We're gonna take you to school, but you ain't passing the course
Laughin, harassin your ass as you decline in the war
Call you Bart, cause we punish you with LINES on the 'board'


just some shit we were messing with a while back
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Yo I like the overall feel of this collab. Each person came hard in their verses, there's nothing to critique, only props to give. I'd like to see more of the same. Reppin for your crew is where it's at. Real shit.
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Re: ART Collab

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Defiance: Your verse had the hardest feel to it. Like you really wanted to go in when you wrote it. Some of the rhymes seemed a bit forced, but that aside it was a good drop to open the show.

Leeroi: You brought the most metaphors to the table, and had some small punches in them. Two of the lines had words which I can only assume are foreign lmao, so they threw me off a bit. Kept the movement going.

Rejiem: This was my favourite verse. The rhyme schemes were good, the style was bursting out and the flow was great. Not much to critique. Liked the school line.

Overall, each had their own styles and did their thing well. These are not my favourite kind of drops, but you guys wanted to show off the groups talent and you definently did that. Good work.
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