88SkyLink vs YungVic

[88SkyLink]

Ok..SO I had this battle with some guy called YungVic who saw one of my posts on another site, and he dissed me..So of course..I went on to kill him..So I want yall to see it and comment on what you think

Yungvic - Beastly Diss
THAT SHIT TIGHT BUT ITZ OBVIOUS URE USIN A RHYME DICTTIONARY
CAUSE ALL DIS RHYMES RE BETTER DAN UR BRAIN CAN CARRY
U COULD GO FUCK D WORLD BUT DONT F WITH ME DIRTY HARRY
URE FLOWS SO LAME ITZ OBVOIUS IT CAME FRM A DUMMY
I KNOW URE BRAINDEAD JST ASK SOMEONE TO READ MA FLOWS 2U N DNT WORRY
UR MOMMA SO WEAK IN BED IM SO SORRY BUT WEN I WENT IN DEEP SHE WENT ALL SHADY
HER VAGINA SO SMALL WONDER HOW UR BIG HEAD COULD GO THROUGH THO I KNOW IT WASNT EASILY
I BET U ALSO KNOW SHE PREFERS ME TO UR DADDY
SHE REFERS TO HIM AS A FAT ASS MAN WITH A BIG FAT TOMMY
THO EVERYTIME IGET IN THERE SHE WEEPS COS OF HOW HARD I GO SHE STILL LOVES ME
I AINT A VIRGIN SO DNT CALL ME VIRGIN MARY
I FCKED WITH UR MOM UR SIS ND UR BABE IT WAS A 3SOME TREATY(HAHAHAHAHA)
I SURE KNOW HOW TO TREAT A LADY
DEY ALL SAID IN BED IM NAUGHTY
ND DEY ALL WISH 2 CARRY MA BABY
BUT IT WAZ A OONE NIGHT STAND IM SORRY
I LEFT DEIR WET PUSSYS ND WENT FOR ANODA SHAWTY MAYB DAT WULD B UR…............................(WELL FUCK U….AASSHOOOLLEEE!!!!!)

88SkyLink - Beastly Diss Response
Who are you to be COCKy, when my dick gave you a life span son
Who the hell are you to even fucking mention you’re grand mum
My pens a walking hand gun, I keeps on spraying them cartridge
'First day' with me, will leave you 'flying' to heaven like a 'partridge'
I got hard like a virus, Im just trying to get my name spread
Ya girl gave an insane head that the bitch got my brain dead
Never will my membranes dread, to think of any killer flow
Michael Jackson on theses bitches, cuz girls always like a thriller show
And yet still a hoe, never stopped ya birth, despite the menopause
Have this bitch-ass clown clapped so much that I need to end applause
And Then A clause from me'll turn this “beast” into Paul McKenna's Horse
Cuz Im hungry as fuck, so should I burn this feast *well of course*
Guess I can give Hell a 'Porshe', he can have his ass well 'ridden'
Someone get a mitten, for what was just written, there should be a mellow pause
Oh Lord forgive me for my lyrical thesis, got the bitch in pieces
Put ya sufferings up a camera so long, break the record made by Regis
Im the true definition of greatness, you don’t really need a dictionary
I got the bars to scar bitches with imagery, the depictions scary
I spit the verse for all those big bitches who try to get personal
So cold-hearted, that I’ll convince ya baby-momma that a hearse is cool
AMEN

Expos
*He's my Son (joke), making my mother his Grand mum
*The first Day of Christmas
*Paul McEnna is a weight-loss specialist
*refers to the phrase 'I'm so hungry I can eat a horse'
*In relation to the above Expo, A Porshe has a Horse Logo
*Regis holds the Guinness World Record for the most time spent in front of a television camera

[Sir Kevin O Shea]

Cata>>>vic

Decent diss, Regis line is cool.

[88SkyLink]

lol thnx

[Arvincible]

LOL this looks like it was on topix..

anyways you deffo killed this kid he didnt know what he was saying lol

your delivery is good just the substance is so so
and plus its important that you reread your lines because the spelling can really throw off the readers.. i know this was just free styled probably but still lol


good stuff anyways

[88SkyLink]

thnx

[ScottJames]

youngVic really sucked. it was awful. dude needs lots of elevating..
ur wasnt bad. u need to string together multis better. use more and make them flow.. ur punches were too basic. u had too many universal puns. u need some nameplay in there. some lines were reeeally weak. dont do ur mama jokes or christmas puns...ever... u got the concept down, just try thinkin outside the box..

[88SkyLink]

thnx