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[JDR]

You can stop the lame gimmicks, cos all the Jack personals has got the same sentence
So wit beef, he's not inflamed with it, he just wanted feedback so he dropped my name in it

Robber back up, it's time sucka...

Jack a beast that has these bitches do all the work like some lazy dudes in porn
the crazy truth is born, coz I'll leave Haz wit Bodied lines like a Yankees Uniform
Ya plainly abused & torn, this niggas in the worst spot to smoke
Ya verse not a joke? Fuck a part 2 when we still don’t understand the first drop you wrote
You can get clapped or knifed, niggas know my raps is tight, it’s a fact of life
So you could say Jack is nice, while this bitch has been murked by over HALF THE SITE!!
It’s almost sad you write, Fuck wit Rippa? I know that dream can seem well
Ya past deemed a weak tale, juss to Bitch over lines like a track team of females
Damn. But look Duke, I’m on a path to rock ya shit harassed wit raps & logic whits
Jack can craft a constant hit, while Haz look like all the other niggas like black adopted kids
A mass of problem spits, you got it bitch? When I’m attacked / provoked in a brawl
My raps wrote in a style that makes this nigga take cover like Bass Boats in the Fall
Haz knows who to call, another comical slug fest
This nigga couldn’t stay a head of the results with a molecule drug test
A probable thugs text is a stuffed mess, peep the lines hes tossed
Winnin’ 60 battles is dope until you look at how many times he’s lost
I really hate to Ether kidd, but I’m believin’ Haz a weak act
You really don’t think you suck nigga? Peep ya lack of Feedback!!!
Raps that seem whack, I can’t believe how this dude bares more beatings
Another nigga bodied on the screen like the New airport screening
If we met out on the street, I guarantee this bitch cops a weapon
But I don’t want to fuck wit you, I aint interested in Quix’s sloppy seconds

[FlipSide]

Dam Bro... U Went Hard.. Good Punches Ect... I G2g.. Jus Wanted to Drop An " I Read This Link"

[- Mutual -]

damm man you went in on'em and did it well, i was feeling the flow on this, i had it mentally in my head whilst reading and they were dope all round, maybe if the flow was more consistent would have been better but none the less they all made a loud impact and that closer was dope, man keep this shit up i wanna see what Has has to return to this shit dopeness, you keep this shit comin JDR i'm lovin it man

[Dana Riot]

This was pretty hard, call me sadistic but I like watching people go back and forth with these type of disses, lol. The only negatives I can point out is that a couple of bars had a messy flow but shit, it happens.

[Quix]

Ya plainly abused & torn, this niggas in the worst spot to smoke
Ya verse not a joke? Fuck a part 2 when we still don’t understand the first drop you wrote
You can get clapped or knifed, niggas know my raps is tight, it’s a fact of life
So you could say Jack is nice, while this bitch has been murked by over HALF THE SITE!!

talking bout bitch slapping a nigguh. .. nice


Raps that seem whack, I can’t believe how this dude bares more beatings
Another nigga bodied on the screen like the New airport screening
If we met out on the street, I guarantee this bitch cops a weapon
But I don’t want to fuck wit you, I aint interested in Quix’s sloppy seconds

Nice bars here fam ... you ripped hazz a new asshole on this one!


and the best part is .. .this looked like you barely tryed!!!

Holla!

[JDR]

Thx 4 the feedback. Much appreciated. Haz aiight, i like goin at him. Anyways, lookin' forward to what Haz brings back.

[Thu Hem]

This Bomb is xploding....
mah kind of like.

really went hard man keep @ it.

[AntiMaTTer]

You can stop the lame gimmicks, cos all the Jack personals has got the same sentence
So wit beef, he's not inflamed with it, he just wanted feedback so he dropped my name in it

Robber back up, it's time sucka...

Jack a beast that has these bitches do all the work like some lazy dudes in porn
the crazy truth is born, coz I'll leave Haz wit Bodied lines like a Yankees Uniform
Ya plainly abused & torn, this niggas in the worst spot to smoke
Ya verse not a joke? Fuck a part 2 when we still don’t understand the first drop you wrote
You can get clapped or knifed, niggas know my raps is tight, it’s a fact of life
So you could say Jack is nice, while this bitch has been murked by over HALF THE SITE!!
It’s almost sad you write, Fuck wit Rippa? I know that dream can seem well
Ya past deemed a weak tale, juss to Bitch over lines like a track team of females
Damn. But look Duke, I’m on a path to rock ya shit harassed wit raps & logic whits
Jack can craft a constant hit, while Haz look like all the other niggas like black adopted kids
A mass of problem spits, you got it bitch? When I’m attacked / provoked in a brawl
My raps wrote in a style that makes this nigga take cover like Bass Boats in the Fall
Haz knows who to call, another comical slug fest
This nigga couldn’t stay a head of the results with a molecule drug test
A probable thugs text is a stuffed mess, peep the lines hes tossed
Winnin’ 60 battles is dope until you look at how many times he’s lost
I really hate to Ether kidd, but I’m believin’ Haz a weak act
You really don’t think you suck nigga? Peep ya lack of Feedback!!!
Raps that seem whack, I can’t believe how this dude bares more beatings
Another nigga bodied on the screen like the New airport screening
If we met out on the street, I guarantee this bitch cops a weapon
But I don’t want to fuck wit you, I aint interested in Quix’s sloppy seconds

this shit was pretty dope... dont take this the wrong way, but seriously, wasting THAT many lines on just Haz? LMFAO... well, guess if you gona do it do it right but still lol

[Arvincible]

sick....omg lol

awesome delivery u dont needa hear shit u heard before. fire.

[pablo1212]

Ohmy .. you just tore this guy apart... If you was to say this outloud in person , the delivery would be amazing lol ... but overall great drop , and i really liked some of the punchlines in there

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[vanity]

wow this was very impressive, loved the use of multis, wordplay and hard punches!!! the color of the text makes it a lil hard to read but well worth it!

[88SkyLink]

Damn! ya raped his ass.This had it all; good multis, nice rhyming scheme and some killer punches.
The only criticism I can possibly give is on the flow, it wasn't up to the standards of the other skills used in this written.
But overall it was a really strong diss, this is gonna be hard to top, I wonder if Haz is gonna reply...anyway keep it up..peace

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