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Now I came along way in this industry so swag me the fuck out..

Presidential instrumental up in the South Central,
Trying to understand these slang mentals.
These pussy lyrics are bleeding like it came on its menstrual.
Make the deceased rise from hell,I stay killing hoes,
Y’all just a dolphin but ima killer whale.
All I’m doing is inhaling dope weed,
Smoking on this bomb ass Marley herb seed.
Kids I advise you not to do cocaine,
You’ll be dead by the age of 27 like the legendary Kurt Cobain.
Unsigned phenomenal hype from the V.A,
Don’t ever get a handjob from a girl that’s from the U.K.
That bitch gone smell like she lived in a Subway.
I know you looking confused like how would I know,
My niggas dick stinked after she took a blow.
Plastic equals clone bitches,
Ex. Lil Kim looks like Kim Kardashian,
Call that bitch Lil Kim Kardashian.
Let em both get in a pool of silicon to splash-in.
My convention don’t strive for this much attention,
Fire alarm these motherfuckas safety from a prevention.
Tiffany, The Creator is creating extravagant inventions.
These rappers nowadays beefing for publicity,
Next thing you know they writing there lyrics in a facility.
Bums go buy Sorry for the Wait; Lil Waynes mixtape.
I’d rather look at Ray J & Kims sextape,
Than listen to a nigga thats been butt raped.
Who the fuck is Patron Mylan?
I hate to be mean,
But fuck Patron I’m sippin on fucking lean.
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Not bad at all a few odd lines, a few out of left field and a few that hurt the flow but u did ok could work on ya rhyme scheme a bit though...
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