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The Elitists - "Strange Females"

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(QB)
Strange females, no details, chipped paint on the hand and feet nails//she works in retail, layaway and resale//still sharing phone minutes, but thinks she is a princess//showing up on talk shows seeking paternity tests
3x

(Calico)
They try to ask a ~Question to Engage~…Nahh they just ~Pester you into Rage~,
Other Dudes out to Pound some 'Dog' Hoes that should have been ~Left in the Cage~.

Going to Exclusive shit…stuff you would never think she be in,
Quickly stalked my Clique on Twitter then followed me in.

Almost ~threw up on me seat~…to see all the shit that ~grew on her Feet~,
Her ~Cooch totinN heat~…but to her breath a Blow will really ~BBQ your meat~.

This ~Bitch a Goner~…man and now some ~Simps all on her~,
Treated her like the snack Bar she was killinN pulled the ~Dip up on her~.

She ~Embraced it all~…thought about her sexy Friend but stalker is now just ~Wasted Alcohol~,
Get her Friend to my ~place and Ball~…tells me in a free moment… “Im tryna ~Escape with yall~”.

So im tryna ~Mob out~…get the Friend away from Stalker…that Extraction ~Job Route~,
Leaving…Stalker tries to ~Call out~ as the guards sees her crew sneaked in…”yall ~all out~!!!”

(QB)
Strange females, no details, chipped paint on the hand and feet nails//she works in retail, layaway and resale//still sharing phone minutes, but thinks she is a princess//showing up on talk shows seeking paternity tests
3x

(QB)
You don't entice the throne, no tricking, leave the price alone
bickering nonsense and sounding like a pest on a broken microphone
trollops with motives but players who know this remain focused
over these jumpoffs like slam dunking backboards to gain showbiz
I don't do buying meals, rubbing feet and gentlemanly kissing hands
I borrow dough to bake the bread for my slices, thats been my plan
chivalry doesn't cook the bacon, butter the biscuits or jelly the toast
cob the corn, peel the potatoes, iron clothes or marinate the roast
instead it leads to stories about late nights always missing all the facts
only remixed versions of the original like old songs sampled on tracks

(QB)
Strange females, no details, chipped paint on the hand and feet nails//she works in retail, layaway and resale//still sharing phone minutes, but thinks she is a princess//showing up on talk shows seeking paternity tests
3x
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Post by AntiMaTTer »

this was pretty cool little read, some of the lines were a bit over streched i think on some of the multis and rhymes like

Almost ~threw up on me seat~…to see all the shit that ~grew on her Feet~,
Her ~Cooch totinN heat~…but to her breath a Blow will really ~BBQ your meat
maybe youre not trying to do a real multi but i always match my syllable count, always. the THREW UP ON ME SEAT sounds weird so ima just pretend you meant to say MY seat lol.

But id leave a more detailed break down but im fucking hungry and need to eat lol Not bad elitest, where was your third partner? theres 3 of yall right?
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Yes, we are crew of three. Somtimes we might drop two at a time or all three at once.
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lol good shit... wish i wrote a verse for this... love the jabs thrown... keep up fellas...
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Its "ok" to my taste but i liked qb's verse more simplz co it aint got none of this, "~~"

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Post by Defiance »

lol.. did that opener shit was hot

but y'all did ya thing for sho.. liked QBs shit the best


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liked both alot great job! :)
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Great Collabo here'
i enjoyed every Detail good work
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Nice collab, couldn't help but notice the focus on feet. Lol. But had some nice lines and flow from both sides of the board. Keep up.
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Post by For Real »

Have to agree with Anti on Cal's verse. With the syllables being so off at times I found it hard to read through the flow. The topic was good and some funny lines, but just at some points a little too choppy. QB took it down a more complex route, with gave a good contrast to Cal's. Some good lines, especially the chivalry one.

Good collab guys, and will be looking forward to seeing the outcome of our stuff.
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