Baron Enders VS Jayzon_black (Baron Enders wins KO)

[Enders]

Topic picked by M33Kish

"A day in the life of a stalker"

8 Bars

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I'll post my two vote links with my verse... Check.

[jayzon_black]

Alright then, let have at it. I'll post my links with my drop. Check.

-- Wed Jul 20, 2011 6:46 am --

out of my peripheral I peep my victim sitting at the bar on (baron) the end her (enders) company weak as the punch drink she's steadily nursing//the poison coursing, loser cursing under his breath, it's no contest, even trying his best he can't reach the breast, so I confess-

Like an usher slowly making my way, at least in fantasy, instead I scope the scene//she's slurping that promethazine, dreams of losing liquid soldiers cumin into being, it's her I fiend and now the head slowly nodding-

Forget the probing and prodding, I sweep and scoop this kitty litter, shitfaced, just one night and taste and then I'll quickly quit her//But first it's time to deliver, been scoping shawty for some time, retracing steps and every line, so I know just how to find, this piece of mine (peace of mind)-

Seeking sanctum in her warm embrace but always distanced, hiding in the seams it would seem that while close I always missed it//Found a strand in a lock-must have got caught, placed it with the rest that I copped, some say I should stop, but the thrill of the chase surrounds me and feeling her face confounds me-

I quickly awake from dreams of sorrow and lust, degraded disgust, disillusioned from contusions of the elusive slut and yet I must//simply shake away the fiends I harbor and trust, belated enough, no longer waiting it's time, no more debating-

The dime already left the quarterback at the bar, stumbled to the car, down the boulevard, stopped at the park//it wasn't too far, but certainly dark, carton to match it was a spark, brought fire eager to indulge in nights desires

Ripped the denim then the vickies, left the secrets for the feds to find, already gloved up, not a print or prince thats left behind//she's fit and fine, like the female lead in swordfish, and better still she's mine, since I peeped the dime, I knew I need to wait my time

And so I let this monster ball play out with my jimmy johnson, slowly start to wake, asphyxiate and then i hear the swansong//dig the tomb in dedication, as I place her in the basement, now attentions are too vacant, gotta find a new replacement...

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[Enders]

Cornelius Rupert III
Chapter Four – The Start

I close my eyes to see their faces – distant cries that miss this life as I relive my finger placement – Once Alive, now they live adjacent to my basement – Now I die to fill my high with her face... scent...

...6:00a.m.
The door swings as her pores sing for my embrace to take her gently, it’s more than tempting-
She’s impressing, I picture her pressing her pelvic against me, undressing her, no room for guessing-

...12:30p.m.
She works with ease, parts of me grind to squeeze, but she's blind to me, I'm inclined to leave-
behind this tease, lies an addicting disease...a hunger I need to seize, bring the world to her knees-

Then bring her to mine, the way she fingers her mind, twirls her digits chillin the spine-
I watch her answer the line, as I waste no time, release the pressure I whisper, "you'll be mine"-

...4:30p.m.
She splits for dinner, I follow like a dog, kick to the liver, whimpered outraged cuz I know her steps-
I shortcut, take a breath, approach her next, she looks through as if she doesn’t know I'm in her life till death-

DAMMIT ITS SET!!!, I'll take her essence, DAMAGE IT'SWEAT!!! till there's nothing left, I CANT BELIEVE THIS!!!
I dedicate months out of my life for THIS GRIEVANCE!!! SHE LOOKED THROUGH ME!!! Believe you me! YOULL BLEED THIS!

...8:00p.m.
I watch you pace inside, crying out loud an invite, as you eat alone, my insides, screech for your door-
I've seen this before, the lights go out, my memory soars, I tore through the bushes to greet this young whore

...2:00a.m.
I look up to the sky and I see her face - Intensive cries about her distant life as I rejoice my finger placement- She's alive, about to die adjacent to my basement - Now I know why, I needed this high, never mind where the days went...

-- Thu Jul 21, 2011 5:58 am --

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[Sir Kevin O Shea]

Jayzon I respect your verse but this one belongs to Baron Enders. His flow made it a more enjoyable read, and his content came gave a deeper story impact.

Vote: Baron Enders

[Enlightend]

Baron had a better overall verse he painted a better picture.. while maintaining flow... I also like the way he came at the topic... very creative..

Vote... baron

[Kuhlerblynd]

The flow, creativity, and just the way it was laid out got this one for me, honestly. Jay, you didnt do bad or anything, but try thinking outside of the box a little more. Nothing else to say really, I give all cats to Baron.

Vote- Baron

[Alvin]

Baron Enders wins KO