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CATA' THA MOST CONDENCED FEAR

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INFINITE I RETIRES
TRUE VETERANZ STAYS WIRED

I NEVER SWEAT THA TECHNIQUE

( MEANING-a practical method or art applied to some particular task
skillfulness in the command of fundamentals
)

I STAY EQUIPTED MULTI-TASKING ANY ELEMENTZ
SOME SAYS IM JUDIEST
BUT IM KNOWN TO SLAY WAR ELEPHATZ

ELEPHATZ SO-CALL MCEEZ
WHO TRIES TO SPIT INTELLIGENTLY

I WAS BORN THIRD FROM THA SUN
MY SCRIPTURES SHOULD BE WRITTEN IN THA HOLY QU’AN

WHO SAYS THEY’RE DROPPIN BOMBZ
I SPITZ RATICAL HELL EXPLODING LUNGZ

I’M THA BEST WHOEVER CARRIED IT
I BATTLED EVERY MCEE WHO CLAIMS THA CHARIOT

STAYING MENECE TO THIZ SOCIETY
FATALITY TO THOSE WHO WISHED AND TRIED ME.

THIZ IS JUST A TASTE OF WHAT I BECOME
Cata’ HELL BORN SON OF BABYLON
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nice man good flow.. short as fuck tho.. liked it man good lil drop.. had some potential for sure.. a lot better structuring than most your pieces..

and hey feed shit man.. its a feed to drop kinda site doogle
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Defiance, thats a trophy coming from you!
i really do appreciate tha props, i was tired as hell this morning, i had to drop a few lines woke up passedout on the keys..lol
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this was a nice drop...I was feeling it, but was very short man, could've provided more, there's still room for improvement, possibly vocab to bolster your bars, but keep at it..
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see.. This was better than your other drops, flow is there

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thanks to all
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hey catastrophic, can u check out my writtens plz?
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Post by COMPUTERCHIPS »

Diggn this first few bars the most. It was cut a little short. Didnt quite get to feel ur style enough. I'll be looking out for more of you. good drop tho.
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