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- Seanny T
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Prime Time Demo
Aight everyone, my second song from my mixtape and my single (which isnt done but i want to get ppl to know me NOW haha) enjoy and leave feedback. and again, if u want to do a collab im open for it lol
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- jayzon_black
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Re: Prime Time Demo
Real talk, I'm feeling the smooth beat here...The vox are recorded a little hot (almost clipping) you might want to turn the gain down when you clean it up. I wouldn't mind jumping on this one like I did on IT, hot 16, if you got a clean instrumental of the beat (w/o the chorus) I think I'd like to take a shot at redoing it, not re-writing, just re-recording it, to see how you like it.
Either way, this definitely has potential and is on my radar as a smooth summer jam flip heading into the cuddle up fall session. Get at me!
Either way, this definitely has potential and is on my radar as a smooth summer jam flip heading into the cuddle up fall session. Get at me!
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- Seanny T
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Re: Prime Time Demo
yea man if u want to redo the chorus go ahead, i cant seem to get the sound i want for it from myself lol but u get the jist from what i recorded. and u got it right on the nail, its a chill summer beat perhaps for when u drive on a hot summer day and enjoy...a primetime!
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- jayzon_black
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Re: Prime Time Demo
lmao, fa show.
Do you have the original instrumental? Without the chorus? I'll download both and keep the feel.
Do you have the original instrumental? Without the chorus? I'll download both and keep the feel.
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Re: Prime Time Demo
uhh Quality of vocals needsa lil werk..but you probly know that...
beat had a real kick back feel....is this original?..if so not bad..
I agree bout the it havin a smooth mellow vibe..but theres alot of beat riding in ya style....deliv is better than the first ones i heard from ya tho..so way to step up..
hmm well yeah redoin the hook would probably bring a lil more proffesionalism to it.or adding Gsnap to help smooth out ya pitch a bit.....but good to hear you doin ya thing du'...
beat had a real kick back feel....is this original?..if so not bad..
I agree bout the it havin a smooth mellow vibe..but theres alot of beat riding in ya style....deliv is better than the first ones i heard from ya tho..so way to step up..
hmm well yeah redoin the hook would probably bring a lil more proffesionalism to it.or adding Gsnap to help smooth out ya pitch a bit.....but good to hear you doin ya thing du'...
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- Seanny T
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Re: Prime Time Demo
yea i want someone who can have more mellow higher voice to do chorus, and i havnt edited the start of my vocals AT ALL lol im doin it now and recordin more, now that im done finals and not working. ima keep the verses to myself on this one tho jayzon, but u can have chorus. on IT u got a verse too, but id like leeroi green to do chorus cuz its someone different and i wanna see his flow and what he comes up with. MIXTAPE COMMING AT THE END OF SUMMER SO GET STOKED!!!!
-- Wed Jul 13, 2011 4:09 pm --
jayzon here is the beat only
-- Wed Jul 13, 2011 4:09 pm --
jayzon here is the beat only
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- jayzon_black
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Re: Prime Time Demo
Cool, I'll download it, and rework the chorus and have it back up later tonight.
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- jayzon_black
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Re: Prime Time Demo
Here is my re-recorded take of the chorus
-- Wed Jul 13, 2011 8:57 pm --
That better?
-- Wed Jul 13, 2011 8:57 pm --
That better?
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