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Defiance
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Fastlane

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after i heard the bad meets evil shit i had to do something like this

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/hipho ... 23021.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/infin ... 23101.html

:written to "fastlane" off bad meets evil: (its a higher tempo flow)

with madness my tactics change the spectrum
back from suspension, you better pay attention
gripping a smith an wesson, words coming from my small intestine
causing indigestion.. with savage tension full of aggression
ripping apart a session... my name should be mentioned with the greatest
known as the highest rated as i grab the world and shake it
im high baked and faded.. dropping wasted statements
running soon as i hit the pavement.. not prone for patience
on the cut call me laceration back from my vacation
leveling off this equation lyrically OH!!! im so amazin
waving a blatant segment locked but ima bout to break in
takin this game by storm born with scales an horns
i maim and scorn dropping hottness in a flamin form
have emcees saying oh my lord!! driving a stolen ford
screaming words til i got swollen cords leaving your honey's colon sore
i go for more if you aint selling than what you holding for
holding a golden sword i swing and kink the fences
you girlies pink is restless dropping bombs yeah! i sink defenses
on the brink of defness better grab your prefence
sick with no need of reference the captain and the entire army
heated so not even fire harms me ya betta call ya mommy!
im strapped with a tommy.. spit round for round
dropping hits around the town the pound for pound
heavyweight with the ground and pound once my sound was found
iller so drown you clowns other words my sounds are liquid
a living wizard cutting his tracks with metaphoric scissors
better grab your moms and sisters i spit like a living twister
so now do you get the picture!!!

"living life in the fastlane
Pedal to the medal
living life in the fastlane"

this was keyed so tell me what you think
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Re: Fastlane

Post by Momeijah »

Not bad I thought the rhymes were cool in the 1st half most of all, and the flow there. The 1st half was just better than the 2nd half I'd say. Content wise it was good for a key but nothing really mindblowing, I didn't see any stand out lines or anything new in the drop if you know what I mean. Wasn't bad though man.
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