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LIFE ft asia & young d.c

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LIFE ft asia & young d.c

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lemme know
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Re: LIFE ft asia & young d.c

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Yo man, your progress is really beaming now man, the only thing i would suggest is some different switch ups in delivery. As for the hook, sounds like the singer is holding back. NOt sure what it is exactly, just doesn't sound right. Second verse, he's got a clean style i guess, not bad all around. in the hook, when they say "NO longer worried now", "no" might be coming in too loud. Not bad overall man, get active!!
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Re: LIFE ft asia & young d.c

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appreciate it my dude.......real talk.......and i be so damn busy wit these 2 jobs mayne but il try n do somethin
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