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Who's giving me a sign like Aries
To free the human mind like a public library
The primary source for 'one of a kind thoughts is'
Bizarre, yet stunning like 'money inside corpses'
Bookshelves falling, stacked 'to the roof'
An old chandelier, is attached 'to it too'
A room for intelligence and 'not for shoes'
A chest plate for a knight and his 'obstacles'
Where fresh air thrives, like a 'toxic fume'
This kingdom of learning is 'not for fools'
My personal behavior is up to par
On top of the list for this criterion
Try to attend and you 'might just fail'
Cause everything's dark like a 'light just fell'
Pessimist are not allowed in any of are realms
They're bound to influence us in put us in a cell
Trapped like slaves in the middle passage
Our librarians don't want it to happen
This school's to good for anything tragic
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Nice flow and rhymes. Good drop.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
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Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

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