adam n eve

[probablyTreed]

trees is my
habitat,
habitual smoker,
from the canopy im a serious joker,
matter fact
you can call me sarcastic toker,
midnight flights fulla papers like folders,
splinter cell smoker, covert,
hooded up,
cobra,
good enough roller still gettin pro-er,
roll game proper,
twist like copter leaves that fall offa trees,
i rap on trees,
i put wraps on trees,
packing bongs,
puttin trees on trees,
big trees like christmas eve,
freshest buds ever seen,
call em adam n eve



http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/the-s ... ml#p175422
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/tha-m ... ml#p175420

[Kause mc]

Hmm very short and structure is all over the place.
Not BAD lines tho. Keep doin ya thing bro just put a bit more into ur posts. Kinda wastes ur feeding of two other posts

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[probablyTreed]

the structures fine, my flow makes it work without soundin forced or anything. like habitat rhymes with matter fact, n other shit u might not have picked up on. take my word for it

[MonuMental]

I fucks with this. Crisp flow, bruh. Good drop.

[Kause mc]

Oh well thats all that matters then. Just from how i read it, it looks wierd to me. Anyways stay up

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[probablyTreed]

good lookin out dudes, real talk

[Alvin]

Erno man, felt entirely too short, like it lacked substance all together. You tem to write about the same stuff, and sure its cool th first time, maybe second, but you lose your audience after a while.

[probablyTreed]

personal preference, sounds like u have a personal problem,
or a problem personally, regarless its a problem thats not personable..... personification

[Alvin]

Congradulations on being redundant.