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Geeky S(h)-(p)IT

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nice lil Snoop Dogg style beat haha...diggin it...like niggas in Kardashians! lol..good shit bro..diggin it
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Post by KING RUM12 »

Yess..sounds classy n hip jopish...love the consistent flow

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beat was dope. reminded me of a older Snoop Dogg
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I love the vibe for this, really mellow but still delivers. the swisher line is also insane.
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flow isn't bad, Im impressed with the breath control especially with that flow, you may have punch-in but i couldn't tell so nice job...the quality wasn't gr8 tho, some eq and compression needed, the topic was new and unique, good drop man
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thanks for the feed, Uppin.
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I liked it flow was real good and the beat reminded me more of old tribe though.... more then snoop some funny lines too
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yeah this beat got an old school feel..its coo

wow this flo is pretty good bro ..real consistent..
i think i said it before but ya got a diggable planets type of vibe to your flo and deliv..it's all good..

all in all i think ya style fits the vibe of the beat so thats a plus..

quality aside this was decent all in all...time to upgrade that Mic man...1
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yeah this is heaps chill, vocals sound abit loud though, flow was good but it would of been nice to switch it up (: but this is dope.
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Post by The Hand of God »

i'm not really feeling the mix on this

you're too loud most of the time, then sometimes your vocals dip down behind the beat

i didn't like the ad-libs either

fix that stuff and it's pretty dope
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This beat is reaaal dope, i love beats like this. The flow is on point and ur delivery fits the beat. My only problem is the mix, like hand of god said sometimes ur too loud and other times u get behind the beat. Fix that shit and this will be dope fam
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