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MonuMental
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Depth is dope, at least, when you're deeper than most,
Never boast relevance, I'm just preaching to ghosts,

Thoughts erode sediments, betterment, keeping it close,
Mental coasts where thoughts come and go in a flow,

Teeth on a floor, someone had to push it for more,
Wreath on a door, say goodbye and return to the corn,

Forever more these are truths at humanity's core,
Frail and shunned by most, is our sanity poor,

Is vanity sure or does it flee with youth in time,
Who draws the line, margin of truth in a rhyme,

A booth and a mic, start to blend sound and sight,
A moon and a night, dark making love to the light,

No use in a fight, does the hurt face or hurt fist win,
When the mace sprays does it leave a dent in the wind,

In an AK does the bullet have a name and a map,
In a kids grave, does he know it's more than a nap,

Born into traps, each generation greedier than the last,
The glass is empty, the needy never learn from the past,

Problems we face are ones we hate to ever claim true,
The only way to get straight is to elevate me and you.
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[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

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Re: Elevate Us

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fuckin raw homie, i like the whole elevated idea as i myself try to achieve this. humans are fucked, were aliens! the moon, dark makin love to light line is too raw
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Re: Elevate Us

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I appreciate the feed, bruh!!
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

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Re: Elevate Us

Post by TreTru »

Dude no bullshit this is Deep..without puttin cheese on that pizza..real talk....your multis and flo are pretty much perfect for this man..no lie..

uhhmm well ok..where the hell is da beat?...lets go record this already dude!!!haha good shyt mon!
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Re: Elevate Us

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Lol I appreciate that, bruh! I would be droppin strictly audio by now if I was still back home lol.

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Lol I appreciate that, bruh! I would be droppin strictly audio by now if I was still back home lol.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

[center]a-series-of-unfortunate-events-vt23866.html[/center]
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Re: Elevate Us

Post by Defiance »

haha.. yeah yeah this shit was deeper than the mariana trench homie... solid content with a inner message woven into the lyrics... me an you got a pretty simular style and message to our shit... not on that bullshit talking shit type ish.. like it man keep dropping
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Re: Elevate Us

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Already, bruh!!
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

[center]a-series-of-unfortunate-events-vt23866.html[/center]
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Re: Elevate Us

Post by Thu Hem »

good concept.... nice delivery, vocab... was fuckin dope as fuck and some few multies n inner rhyme kill it man..

Respect.

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Re: Elevate Us

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Good lookin out.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

[center]a-series-of-unfortunate-events-vt23866.html[/center]
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