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MonuMental
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I don't talk sweet, I spit truth, present proof,
Rip roots where boots tread, a spread where lies grew,

My eyes knew, the ink was loosed, the page bruised,
The same dude as me was a sage engaged to,

An outlet for rage on a stage he played through,
Fountains of pain he bathed in and lost youth,

He fought too, ridiculed by the fools he talked to,
Brought to a decision, as a mission he sought booths,

Spitting admissions of visions he held inside,
Bled and cried, salt and crimson, demons exorcised,

Sweated and tried to fix life, promised a compromise,
Mic'd his inner thoughts, knowledge killing the lies,

Spilling his pride, pad, pen, grim looks in his eyes,
Went to war against himself, fully militarized,

Relished the ride, no telling if he was dead or alive,
Emerged spitting blades, a surgical edge in his rhymes,

Deadened at times, reddened his eyes, hoping to cope,
Struggled, choked, fighting ropes affixed to his throat,

Mumbled and moped calling angels, "Deliver me hope",
Stumbled and broke on a bed of all the lyrics he wrote,

Tumbled and groped for a grip to avoid the fall,
Opened his eyes, spied in red what it said on the wall,

"Other worlds await to sate the hunger you've woken",
He let go, fell forever gripping lyrical notions.
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[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

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Post by probablyTreed »

intricate as fuck, u snapped!
stoned locomotion, im highly trained, flow fluid with pricy strains
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I appreciate it, bruh!!
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

[center]a-series-of-unfortunate-events-vt23866.html[/center]
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Post by Thu Hem »

Dis shit.... was explodin man,

He fought too, ridiculed by the fools he talked to,
Brought to a decision, as a mission he sought booths,

i love this line man and the rhyme scheme too
good drop bruh... Respect.

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Appreciate it, bruh.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

[center]a-series-of-unfortunate-events-vt23866.html[/center]
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Re: Notions

Post by Defiance »

DOPE man.. DOPE MAN.. digging the lead on stylies where it was constant rhyming very intricrate in your dealings man.. digging it.. keep on dropping
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You already know, bruh.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

[center]a-series-of-unfortunate-events-vt23866.html[/center]
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Post by EcKsTaSy »

killed this one, mental went mental
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Good lookin out, bruh!
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

[center]a-series-of-unfortunate-events-vt23866.html[/center]
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Post by Enlightend »

I liked this alot deeply poetic and lyrical at the same time...also the flow was seamless .. keep up
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Post by Borat »

Yo yo yo I like it man, flows very well for the most part. You also have some Purdy clean multis in there bro, and I'm digging the lyrical content. Keep them coming man for real

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Post by Alvin »

Overall, the rhyme schemes were impressive. Although there was this one part that read wierd "the ink was loosed". Other than that pretty dope man. Seems like your able to deliver your emotions through a good rhyme pattern and vocab, so kudos man.
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Post by COMPUTERCHIPS »

Nice pen! this was fun to read. dug the whole thing i really like the first couple of bars and the militirized line. thanks for dropping this! dopeNess!!
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Post by ippiki_17 »

That was so dope my dude, you inspired the shit out of me. I love your stuff.
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Appreciate it, all!!
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

[center]a-series-of-unfortunate-events-vt23866.html[/center]
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