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Some things are hard to digest, stressed so let the truth be adressed/
demonically possesed, like double D breasts i'll get this weight up off my chest/
what i rhyme is no fiction, perfect diction with jurisdiction/
my prediction, shows serious forms friction and split crucifixion/
i'm a complex equation, quick eat you "cats" llike i was asian/
specified like a social occasion, but no less then an invasion/
my rhymes could subdivide, where i reside your crimes are brushed aside/
your attacks are nullufied, while my lines are justafied/
while you remain uneasy, i could graduate from tuskeegee/
give in completely, sign the treaty in a waved form of graffiti/
lyrically we share no equalty, these rappers are hypocracy/
i flow remarkably, speak tones with the highest quality/
feel the thought of the author, kneel before the alter/
your drowning in muddy water, tainted from a bloody slaughter/
your missing your mid section, i display hip hops resurection/
you'll need the protection, i'm at the crossroads with no basic recollection/


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The usual dopeness of Arcane displayed yet again. Props bruh. Vocab was fucking stellar. Sick drop.
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Arcane wrote:
i'm a complex equation, quick eat you "cats" llike i was asian/
LOL

great written bro good read. 1
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Yeah this was alright yo, flow was abit choppy and shit in some places, but it wasn't to bad, your vocab and punches were the best aspect of this, keep it up
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Re: The Superior

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apprieciate it!
next time i'll string the flow alot better
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Re: The Superior

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updated -.-
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Re: The Superior

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jus wonderin if ur saying it like tusk-e-g lol. cool read tho
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Re: The Superior

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nice shit man, liked the punches thrown here and there. but flow was off, just simply by too many syllables put in on some lines but other than that i liked it.. keep dropping
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Re: The Superior

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i'll keep it in mind

-- Fri Jun 24, 2011 6:48 am --

i was kinda feeling the multiple syllables idea though
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