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MesaR
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Tha Mesar

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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/evil-back-vt68.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/the-s ... ml#p175343


I’m known around your crib like a kettle and stove
I go straight for the kill, not to wrestle on ropes
throw pebbles and stones at your temple and dome
and see the blood pour out from the vessel it flows
I don’t need to be drunk when dropping a diss
but it feels better when I’ve drank a bottle of piss
that’s a bottle of wisk, or even bourbon and rum
I know you like the song, that’s why your turning ya thumb’
someone get me competition cause I’m burning for some
but it doesn’t happen so I go searching for fun
people so stressed out like there hanging for esh
I serve rappers down when there claiming there fresh
I never got high hopes cause I’m aiming for less
got 40 cunts signing when there banging the mess
think your taking over, well i'm guessing ya plans are wrong
i'm standing strong, taking over first from the land of oz.

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Easy going flow which is easy as to read, sick, first few lines were my favoroute. Id breakdown the whole thing but im on my phone. Good written man

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thanks yo, upping some feedback.
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Yo man, this shit was hittin. The flow was just smooth as fuck, and you had some sick lines, as well.
I’m known around your crib like a kettle and stove
I go straight for the kill, not to wrestle on ropes
throw pebbles and stones at your temple and dome
and see the blood pour out from the vessel it flows
This shit was killin. Nice.
people so stressed out like there hanging for esh
I serve rappers down when there claiming there fresh
I never got high hopes cause I’m aiming for less
got 40 cunts signing when there banging the mess
Ill, dude. Tight bars.

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smooth read man, i feel u put ur swag on it an i appreciate the flow. whats the from the land of oz line mean?
stoned locomotion, im highly trained, flow fluid with pricy strains
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dude multis were crazy.. my kind of drop.. like the self hype drop. good structure, solid flow.. keep dropping my australian maestro
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