ILLEST LYRICAL KING

[KING RUM12]

Call me ILK..my speech unleashed cud make thy prAy..
U are my prey..wont get to §leep in ur grave...
U are in my cave...bones crushed fleshed torn away...
Ur crew comes to ur aid..but I'm not in my cave..
There all ready ate...

Pyro manic u'll catch fire when I vomet these words..
Make mods n admins concerned..like (this kid must wana learn..)..
But battlers get a trillion degree Burns...
Keep feeding n votin its only gonna get worse ...

Catch on quick like a train I wana get on...
My cyphers gonna be able to murder one of ur songs...
I haven't heard it but I heard u where thongs..
N I'm tlkin to ne rhyma tht wana challenge the KONG....


Where is my bong I wana get high...
I'm already trippin n so r u guys...
Ur probably surprised...I'm young but I'm wise...
The next battle I'm in I swear there gonna die...

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-- Mon Jun 20, 2011 5:58 pm --

Stop playing n feed me...this ain't perfect ...

[pest]

this was a pretty good read...
should work on the structure of the bars tho...
kinda difficult to catch your flow

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[MesaR]

^ word i agree with the structure of flow, it wasn't a bad read the first section sounded like a hook in my books, anyways keep it up home boy.

[MonuMental]

Cool read, bruh. Lol you said a mouthful. I agree with above about the structure, there's no major problem but it is hard to pick a flow out. It's all in how you spit it, though. Good drop.