My ruined addiction

[Kause mc]

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This is straight from my heart yo... Just broke up wit my girl. Its cliché as fuck but i had to get it out

I sit back downin a six pack, tears fall on my notepad/
The love we once had is now a thing of the past/
Was it right to just give up, after the shit weve been through?/
Or should we try again and lie, pretend and say i love you/

You know me better than anybody could ever know me/
Im sorry for this outcome, i tried to leave you slowly/
But, remember last time we tried to reach agreements?/
We fell back in the trap Of lust, that was enough to beat us/

We know each others secrets, and share each others thoughts/
Reminicin' how you loved to sleep in my boxer shorts/
The way you looked at me was enough to fall asleep/
We fit like a puzzle the way we snuggled for heat/

I feel like this is it for me will anybody match up?/
To you, you were my girl, and nobody could detach us/
You'll always be a part of me, even though i hate it/
The problems we were facing could have probably been debated/

I wish that i could tell you everything up in my dome too/
But i dont wanna know you let alone partly own you/
We brought up wedding rings and everything, talkin big/
Thinkin that this would never end, look, it finally did/

Id give anything up to get that last kiss from you/
Im lost, and dont know what the fuck to do without you/
Questoning my actions tryna figure my faults/
I guess it doesnt matter now, weve reached the final result/

Im a mess, im depressed, you got me fucked in the head!/
I told you everything! And ment every word that i said!/
I fucken HATE YOU! you think that this is how i wanted it?/
A relationship? Shit, we should have never started it!/

You fucken retarted bitch! Oh, watch MY language?/
You hipicrit, YOUR the cause off all of this anguish/
Its funny how things changed from all good to disastrous/
I ripped the valentines day cards up n then i trashed em!/

Im selfish i know, i want you back but i dont!/
Im hopin everything will get better but god knows they wont!/
You got me trapped, feelin like a potential suicide victim/
Your the one and only... my ruined addiction/

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[Enlightend]

im usually not feeling this type of drop... but it came out good i think one of your better pieces... u can tell ur heart was in it...

[Tha Dark Prince]

This was nice, not anything lyrical but itz deep, nice concept applied in the end too, with the title

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-- Sat Jun 18, 2011 7:19 pm --

This was nice, not anything lyrical but itz deep, nice concept applied in the end too, with the title

[TreTru]

yeah this was decent concept is easily relateable..started off a lil slow in the first 2 bars-4 lines but it picked up from there ..more emotion than imagery on this but ..rhyme scheme was decent and fairly easy to follow...

not bad man....keep droppin...1

[Thu Hem]

good shit man.... nice concept feel it a lil.. bit
but som ya rhymes @ the end of these lines seems forced..

not too obvious to people tho..
but keep it up.


But, remember last time we tried to reach agreements?/
We fell back in the trap Of lust, that was enough to beat us

Its funny how things changed from all good to disastrous/
I ripped the valentines day cards up n then i trashed em!/

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[KING RUM12]

This wuz a real drop..I liked it b cuzz its something a lot of pol cn relate to...I feel u cud hv been meener ...can't tell if ur really mad or really sad...but I lliked it gud. Shit

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[Kause mc]

thanks man.. well. i JUST broke it off wit her so..
im upset, but happy n lookin forward to the future..
umm.. i dono its hard but if its for the best i can be happy..
this is real tho its not like i played this one out.. i literally
broke up wit her on friday.. mesars right. fuck bitches git money LOL
thnx for the feed all

[MonuMental]

Fuck the bullshit, this was fucking fire, dude. Fuck a cliche, you made this cause you felt that way, it's a plus if people relate, but fuck em if they don't, this is your blood in words. Dopest bars to me are as follows:

Im a mess, im depressed, you got me fucked in the head!/
I told you everything! And ment every word that i said!/
I fucken HATE YOU! you think that this is how i wanted it?/
A relationship? Shit, we should have never started it!/

You fucken retarted bitch! Oh, watch MY language?/
You hipicrit, YOUR the cause off all of this anguish/
Its funny how things changed from all good to disastrous/
I ripped the valentines day cards up n then i trashed em!/

Im selfish i know, i want you back but i dont!/
Im hopin everything will get better but god knows they wont!/
You got me trapped, feelin like a potential suicide victim/
Your the one and only... my ruined addiction/

I feel that shit entirely. Props on this shit, dude.

[Kause mc]

checking if my avatar works lol

[Kulture]

You had some deep lines in here and a good concept, keep up the good work bro.