(test battle)pest vs king rum (pest wins TKO)

[pest]

4 bars... said 6 here originally. callout said 4 so 4
due in 48 hours from this post

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votes based off

flow
punches
multies
wordplay
personals
enjoyment

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[KING RUM12]

Man.......check

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[pest]

This kids a 'loser', hoppin from 'square to square' tryna gain respect/
Watch me take out this 'pawns knights', quikk to put this 'king in chekk'/

i'll 'rearrange' this kids structure, witness the 'mur-king' of 'king-rum'/
You 'seem-dumb', i bet your 'king-dom' is under a 'queens-thumb'/

This dudes needsa bite some rhymes before he 'bites the dust'/
Cuz this 'kings' rhymes could never be 'golden', even with the 'midas touch'/

This noobs already old news, this is present-tense, talk shit, shoulda been 'hesitant'/
Cuz Your flows couldnt 'blow me away', if they were 'windy' like your 'residence'/ (says hes from chicago)

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[KING RUM12]

Pest control his nuts i'l fold hes just to small I can't see where he go..
How cud something so small spit a wack ass flow ....
my barz are gold like the arts I sold..
That's why I'm in a castle and ur in a hole...


I wish u were a human so I cud attack you...
Cuz I'm n animal chop u up n feed u to cannibals...
Ur not even as big as my pinky toe u goin handle who?...
I can eat u up in one bite I don't need to turn into Hannibal....


I'm steady slappin u ur not worth the punch...
Ur already ate up now where's my captain crunch...
I'm not full at all I usually snack a bunch...
But ur too small so ill skip str8 to brunch ...


We know ur super retarded, but u don't hv to be a dilhole...
I think hes jus mad cuz he can't even stand against n armadillo ...
U are a zero softer then pillow if u get married ill turn u to a widow...
Cuz ur a lil bitch like this girl beating on my window ...Jo

Thas Wut we say in Chicago.....JO!

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[Jsteel]

Alright..multies:Pest punches:king came alil harder imo flow:king wordplay:pest Personals:pest, enjoyment:king i felt king came lil harder in this one, mvgt king

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[Tha Dark Prince]

Pest:
This kids a 'loser', hoppin from 'square to square' tryna gain respect/ Watch me take out this 'pawns knights', quikk to put this 'king in chekk'/

the set up n punch connects well, a simple concept but it came off good, nameplay and flow on point

i'll 'rearrange' this kids structure, witness the 'mur-king' of 'king- rum'/ You 'seem-dumb', i bet your 'king-dom' is under a 'queens- thumb'/

good nameplay, flow, multis

This dudes needsa bite some rhymes before he 'bites the dust'/ Cuz this 'kings' rhymes could never be 'golden', even with the 'midas touch'/

i liked the set up, punch was decent too

This noobs already old news, this is present-tense, talk shit, shoulda been 'hesitant'/ Cuz Your flows couldnt 'blow me away', if they were 'windy' like your 'residence'/

felt this a bit stretched, but the punch was executed well nonetheless

kingrum:
Pest control his nuts i'l fold hes just to small I can't see where he go.. How cud something so small spit a wack ass flow .... my barz are gold like the arts I sold.. That's why I'm in a castle and ur in a hole...

firstly I feel your bars are stretched too much, the punch is a bit basic but good play and names and flow is on point with structure

I wish u were a human so I cud attack you... Cuz I'm n animal chop u up n feed u to cannibals... Ur not even as big as my pinky toe u goin handle who?... I can eat u up in one bite I don't need to turn into Hannibal....

nothing really impressive, punch doesn't sting, but decent

I'm steady slappin u ur not worth the punch... Ur already ate up now where's my captain crunch... I'm not full at all I usually snack a bunch... But ur too small so ill skip str8 to brunch ...

nah not feeling it that much, could see your intents though u should of went onto a new subject instead of carrying size for 3 bars

We know ur super retarded, but u don't hv to be a dilhole... I think hes jus mad cuz he can't even stand against n armadillo ... U are a zero softer then pillow if u get married ill turn u to a widow... Cuz ur a lil bitch like this girl beating on my window ...Jo

stretched, basic imo too, and the punch doesn't hit hard enough for a closer

Punches: Pest had more creativety in his punches and executed them better, rum was a bit basic
Flow: Pest edged this with structure
Personals: tie ,both had good nameplays
Multis: Tie ,pest used them better though rum did have a few
Enjoyment: Tie ,didn't feel anything outstanding from either side, both had some good lines but this made for a decent battle at best, imo

MVGT: pestoe_the_blest_one

1-1

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[Kau the Lion]

Cat sweep to Pest. His flow was much better due to his cleaner and tighter structure. The only thing that might have been even close to a tie was the mutlies. King had no wordplay or nameplay or personals at all. Pest had a few good punches. Midas line was probably my fav.

+1 Pest

[Thu Hem]

flow- pest
punches-king
multies-pest
wordplay-pest
personal-pest
enjoyment-king

MVGT- THA BITCH PEST

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[Moneymaker]

PEST

This kids a 'loser', hoppin from 'square to square' tryna gain respect/
Watch me take out this 'pawns knights', quikk to put this 'king in chekk'/

Dope 2nd line the first was alright 7/10

i'll 'rearrange' this kids structure, witness the 'mur-king' of 'king-rum'/
You 'seem-dumb', i bet your 'king-dom' is under a 'queens-thumb'/

nice mulite 8/10

This dudes needsa bite some rhymes before he 'bites the dust'/
Cuz this 'kings' rhymes could never be 'golden', even with the 'midas touch'/

nice wordplay 9/10

This noobs already old news, this is present-tense, talk shit, shoulda been 'hesitant'/
Cuz Your flows couldnt 'blow me away', if they were 'windy' like your 'residence'/ (says hes from chicago)

this was alright not the best closer 6/10

KING RUM

Pest control his nuts i'l fold hes just to small I can't see where he go..
How cud something so small spit a wack ass flow ....
my barz are gold like the arts I sold..
That's why I'm in a castle and ur in a hole...

more of self hype 5/10


I wish u were a human so I cud attack you...
Cuz I'm n animal chop u up n feed u to cannibals...
Ur not even as big as my pinky toe u goin handle who?...
I can eat u up in one bite I don't need to turn into Hannibal....

eh again self hype 5/10


I'm steady slappin u ur not worth the punch...
Ur already ate up now where's my captain crunch...
I'm not full at all I usually snack a bunch...
But ur too small so ill skip str8 to brunch ...

nice was nice but you were directly at PEST 7/10


We know ur super retarded, but u don't hv to be a dilhole...
I think hes jus mad cuz he can't even stand against n armadillo ...
U are a zero softer then pillow if u get married ill turn u to a widow...
Cuz ur a lil bitch like this girl beating on my window ...Jo

not much of a closer. 5/10

PEST-30
KING-23

MVGT-PEST

[pest]

4- tko

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-- Sun Jun 19, 2011 3:07 pm --

and i voted on the meika 2em battle. cant post link.

[Alvin]

Thread closed, Pest wins TKO

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