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The Devils Contract

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stuck on a corrupt path, like fuck righteousness
brain thick with homicide wondering where my rifle is
its hard to stifle it with no faith like i left my bible ripped
tired of the idle-in stationary feeling psycho sick
wasn't a frightful kid just angry high on testosterone
stress is often shown couldn't get it off my dome
falling for the same lies i was told it was impossible
improbable cause the obstacles make it non-profitable
always stuck in the stop and goes hitting my brakes
sitting with snakes getting bit as i listen and wait
the system is fake hating tomorrow so i live in the day
i'm pissed at mistakes so im always dreamin of the past
as i'm pissing in the wind im scheming on the draft
demons in my path keep me leaning on my stash
the meaning of the facts got my ideas fucked an altered
corrupt and bothered feeling drained and stuck in water
in a rush i faltered and fell off my high pedestal
face is red an cruel chilling with demons yeah i met a few
there is sev-er-al reasons why life is like a deadened pool
i found i'm always hungry but the mind i fed was fooled
my heads confused feel like a train on the wrong track
i hear the plight of angles telling me to come back
but my inner combats got me ready to sign this devils contract.
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stuck on a corrupt path, like fuck righteousness
brain thick with homicide wondering where my rifle is
its hard to stifle it with no faith like i left my bible ripped
tired of the idle-in stationary feeling psycho sick
Dope as fuck and flowed it's ass off, bruh. Sick bars.
i hear the plight of angles telling me to come back
but my inner combats got me ready to sign this devils contract.
These aren't alot, but they were fuckin deep. Nice way to say it, made me visualize your struggle.

All in all, the flow was off the fuckin chain for this piece, bruh. And you came with your usual sense of where to drop some multies and flaunt your vocab. Fire shit, man.
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This was straight FIRE!!
the meaning of the facts got my ideas fucked an altered
corrupt and bothered feeling drained and stuck in water
Whoa! The whole verse is dope! Really feeling the
deep emotion in it. Thanks for droppin this.
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superb vocab....
the first n second line
was dope as fuck.

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i was really feeling this great word usage and i like the structure it flowed real well... just a great verse
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Re: The Devils Contract

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thanks fellas upping this
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