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Try and stop me now. Feed needed, one of my best drops imo

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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/evolu ... ml#p173253
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/cent- ... ml#p173254

Just a short track with one of my best verses imo. Please feed cats i will return feed just link me


Lyrics:
I am the noise pollution artist bombarding your mind frame/
With tight game direct aim hit, insane shit to play with/
Remain sick display this, until you mother fuckers know exactly what my name is//
The same kid thats got you tappin feet the fattest beats/
My last release made quite a buzz drastically/
Mesar one stepped it up a notch you know hes hot/
Id like to hope that ive influenced all the flows hes dropped/
Jak pat attack raps i helped that cat start from scrath and now look where hes at//
Lay it down unstoppable, for campbelltown/
Im the bomb that your yet to figure how to dismantle now/
Clocks tickin, haters stop bitchin/
Love it hate it come debate it i just wont listen/
My pad and pencil builds my mental plus my character/
Stop it? Na ill be finished when ive had enough/
You fags are tough behind a mouse and a keyboard/
Relax your nuts or get fucked your gettin me bored/
Tryna tell me that im not hip hop?/
Thinkin that you know it cos you put got beef on? (got beef is an australian battle league)
Unbeleivable, your the type to hate your own life/
So now you gotta start a fight to try and mess mine?/
Declined. Your a hopeless no hope/
With no intention to approach a microphone you fuckin joke/
Up in smoke is how your thoughts result/
So ill keep spittin on rhythms and record my notes/
Until my dying day id like to say you can try and take the kause out the game but the game in kause remains//
(hahaha.. Try and stop me now!)

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SM8mfc2ljIE&sns=em

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Re: Try and stop me now. Feed needed, one of my best drops i

Post by Tha Q »

hate the accent...

flow is good though


good energy and lyrics




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Post by Kause mc »

Haha thats cool Q thanks for the feed. Unfortunatly i cant change the accent and id rather bring it real than put a fake one on ya no? Thnx for the feed man

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Re: Try and stop me now. Feed needed, one of my best drops i

Post by MonuMental »

Yeah you had some nice hyped up vibes comin offa this and that was cool. Flow was on point, for the most part. Some parts just didn't sit well in my ear, no offense, maybe it was the accent? Anyways, you spit fire, imo, for most of this track, so props. Overall, an enjoyable drop.
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Post by AntiMaTTer »

I gave feedback on YOUTUBE under :ALPHASPITZZ:
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i thought this shit is pretty tight be honest. The accent is, different yea but i dont think its so bad as to affect your flow and lyrics. I can still understand most of what your rapping, you have good flow and sounds like
you got good breath control. Lyrics were pretty sick, kept the flow going smoothly and was pretty well written all in all.

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Post by MesaR »

I heard this a while back, it's pretty good, just crusing kills it though ;)
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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