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Terrorized......

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the hated...

I'm in the desert but this country is getting so cold
put in a choke hold with no chance 4 me ta grow old
I'm just a young women and my hopes are just ripped up
I've been stripped of life and the chance ta live one
a kid trapped in the sex trade a terrorists sex Slave
skeeted n beaten from drugs an abuse every next day
i wake up is it a blessing? or just messy an depressing
i have a name... its Elham and i was taken at just 11
these men made me think they were my way into heaven
and i would be released of pain after my resurrection
but u.s. solders that basically were made to believe
that they were saving me from this hell that raised me
took me away from a promise of happiness why
don't they know that now i will suffer even after i die
every day i hold on to my Quran reciting religious scriptures
praying Alla take me from this world but i just linger
I'm hated because I'm unwed yet my virginity was taken
i didn't want this u would think that would be blatant
but now I'm rejected with no money or job I'm stressing
here money is power, and the power is oppressing
had a child and don't know from who so I'm guessing
just know that it came from the daily molesting
now like clouds black an grey in my mind i replay the terror
because i wasn't saved now I'm being raped forever...

or the hatred...

cus there's kids every day killing, committed to suicide n why
the promise of wealth but there's no coming back once u die
or do they think there doing the work of an angel
and there blessing an releasing the souls of strangers
maybe they don't get the impact of the hate on there soul
maybe there mind is blinded by this country getting so cold
they need to think...
...how real are these terrorist, cliques an gangs
soldiers roll deep in the streets with clicks an bangs
not just us here... it bleeds over the globe in a big range
murder happens everywhere influence by hatred...just show care
holes burning in clothes friends an foes ketchin the devils ear
shits sick all over the world there's that similar struggle
clones n hollow bones while our troubles triple an double

a young girl is plagued by this trade her life will crumble
a kid threatens ta kill by his gods will.. where in trouble
our reality will shatter and the fragments will tumble
into the ocean and sink to the bottom of hunger
this earth fertilized so high cause we drug her
exploit her and thug her........

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-- Wed Jun 08, 2011 3:42 pm --

by the way this was a topical battle win..... :)
Last edited by Enlightend on Thu Jun 09, 2011 6:26 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Terrorized......

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Nice drop the ryhmes were pretty simple but an overall good drop

Had a nice flow and aome imagry

8/10

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Re: Terrorized......

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It was a dope concept, and you delivered the message well in both parts. Nice drop, love to see more like this.
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