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Taco Salad... I very like!
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.... Master chef ruckus?

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Ruckus wrote:Taco Salad... I very like!
OOOOOOH BURN!!!!!! 1 LINE JUST MURDERED EVERYBODY ON HERE!!!!! lol jp short sweet simple and to the point.... I like it.

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WTF is this shit?
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Best drop I have seen a 20/10

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a better drop would be those horses shaking free
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leeroi green wrote:a better drop would be those horses shaking free
Ha ha ha, thank you. That made my day.
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It flowed nicely, had a nice structure with plenty of on point multies. My only suggestion would be for the fifth and sixth bars, make them exist next time, along with all the other ones that weren't there, like all of them. Other than that, fuckin excellent work, bruh. Stay up.
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hm... cunning.. probably one of your better drops, pretty deep stuff here man, i look forward to reading a part 2 to this, definitely inspired me
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MonuMental wrote:It flowed nicely, had a nice structure with plenty of on point multies. My only suggestion would be for the fifth and sixth bars, make them exist next time, along with all the other ones that weren't there, like all of them. Other than that, fuckin excellent work, bruh. Stay up.
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