Stagnant

[MonuMental]

Ain't dropped in a minute, so I wrote down some thoughts to stay active.

I see a shadow on the wall, I could hear a pin fall,
As the wind calls for the souls of the sinful,
I'm a stencil for demons of which I've been full,
All the good in my heart couldn't top off a thimble,
Lyrics are symbols runes that you can't spit,
If your eyes shun truth and your tongue lacks wit,
I speak long on the chill of the blackness,
That I was attacked with, falling in a black pit,
My mind's stagnant, agony everlasting,
Searching for the source of the method to the madness,
I've grown away from positive interactions,
Never feeling flesh always pressing against plastic,
So don't hold me, don't think that I won't snap, shit,
I might cut you open just as soon as you relax, bitch,
Track this wrapped in labels that you've fashioned,
I'm cracked in my fractured mind, sanity smashed in.

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[Arcane]

i like the ideology of this over all piece. smooth flow, i like the imagery. paints a clear picture man! haha really nice piece!

[MonuMental]

Appreciate it, bruh. Not so different from what you had to say in the piece I fed.

[M33Kish]

This shit floooOooooOooowed...

"I'm a stencil for demons of which I've been full,
All the good in my heart couldn't top off a thimble,"

^^^ here on, I was hooked. DOPE line...
This whole drop was fire.... not much else to say.

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[MonuMental]

I appreciate it, bruh.

[Mic S]

This was an a well executed drop
smooth flow, vocab was nice not overused but used in the right spots
imagery was dope - short but to the point
message was clear... good rhyme scheme

Lyrics are symbols runes that you can't spit,
If your eyes shun truth and your tongue lacks wit,
dopest lines i read from this
imagery was perfect there.. dope drop

[MonuMental]

Appreciate it, bruh.

[MonuMental]

Appreciate it, man.

[Defiance]

yeah man i see what your saying with yours and my style of writing.. got that rhythmatic style.. i like the ideology the inner rhymes.. just a smooth entertaining read. short and sweet and too the point..

keep that shit up man

[MonuMental]

Appreciate it, my guy. You def got some dope flows and skills, and I say that on real shit.

-- Mon Jun 06, 2011 10:32 pm --

Appreciate it, my guy. You def got some dope flows and skills, and I say that on real shit.