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everybody has a devil inside

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everybody has thier own devil...

It weighs soo heavy on my mind and shoulders
everyday... not one day goes by without thinking
of that ten second session that took my past
and brought me to a new family... a new life
no child, no wife, only me and my brothers.
didn't care how we got down guns, fists or knifes
we were there everynight holding our "block"... like
selfish school kids carrying lego's in thier pockets.
this devil promised me a life without fear, he offered
me a "piece" of hell bound heaven, he replaced FUN
with a G... and it seemed to work, everywhere i stepped
i gained more and more respect... brainwashed by
my own devotion and respect, i lived in the shodows
of life never feared death... never realized how much
of a blessing the mornings were around here... till
the day i woke up without one...
POET OF THE YEAR 2011
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I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
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i lived in the shodows
of life never feared death.

one of the lines that stood out..but it was nice and u need ur link 2 homie lol
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POET OF THE YEAR 2011
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brainwashed by
my own devotion and respect, i lived in the shodows
of life never feared death

Stood Out Da Most^^^
ova All Pretty Str8 .. Emotion Felt
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Ty Uppin
POET OF THE YEAR 2011
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Post by precise »

lovin that lego's line, and you had a fuckin great way to close it. overall, its extremely dope 9/10 good job dude
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