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Light Dis Weed Up (Dr. GreenThumb) Ft. HKX & Viral

Post by HKX »

Aight guys here's a new song from myself, Loon E Lou & Viral. The title of the song explains it all. We enjoyed making this song it's def one of our favorites. This will be featured on Loon E Lou's tape which is currently in the works. Enjoy this song, leave feed & I'll leave feed as well. This song is FREE TO DOWNLOAD so you know what to do.

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Post by M33Kish »

Fuckin dope, props to everybody on this. The beat matched the mood to it nice and the hook was pretty dope too. I'm finna light one (or 3) to this shit.

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Post by Omnie »

Dope drop...

Weed...nom nom nom...lol

Serio pedo...all 3 did their thing...rhymes, multies...but I gotta say Loon E Lou killed it with the delivery and flow. I liked the piece as a whole. You know Imma download it and bump this shit!!! All of you are known for dropping that fire, so keep that shit up...

One...

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Re: Light Dis Weed Up (Dr. GreenThumb) Ft. HKX & Viral

Post by Mic S »

Hook was dope
verses were dope

everything was lyrically dope
flow - deliver - mic presence... 1st verse could have had a bit of a stronger delivery but other than that dope
the whole track was fire- -- good drop and collab
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Post by Dos »

yea, this is pretty dope.. minus a couple short comings.

Loon:
real nice flow/delivery/and presence. loved the verse over-all. some lil concepts here and there.. when your verse 1st comes in it sounds a lil to quite, but its just the hook overlapping where you were starting early. the verse is solid.. one other thing i noticed was: "if you feel like i do right now" the dubs for that sounded a lil off, not much. btw, your ad libz were perfect in this.

HXK:
as with Loon, real nice flow/delivery/and presence. nothing to say bad about it.. theres nothing bad to say about your verse except that your ad libs are to loud.. besides that, this verse is straight.. great shit.

Viral:
wow.. presence is off the charts. NICE.. delivery is real nice as well, and the flow is straight. again nothing to say, except your ad libs are a lil to loud as well..

the hook is nice, seems like its missing something. but as is it works really well, and fit the beat perfectly.. ad libs are a lil to loud.
and one of minor thing, you needa add some sort of effect to the hook; because thats what i think makes it sound like its missing something.. and you can tell its missing something before and after it kicks in and out of HXK's verse.. they sound the same, theres nothing making either or sound different so the hook blends in to much, and the reason i bring it up and put emphasis on it is because you want a hook to stand out and have the verses circling it. if you fixed that, the track will be dope..

as is, its still fire lol.. but few small things could always make it better. sorry, its the perfectionist coming out i guess.. but as i said, still a fire track and something i would listen to again (in fact i listened to it a few times will giving feed lol)
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DAMN!!!! this track was SSIIIICCKKKKK ya'll killed that shit man... Viral good to hear u back doin ya thing man.... good track guys slaughtered that beat!!!
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Post by HKX »

Good lookin' on da feedback guys all types of feedback welcome. Overall I'm glad u guys r diggin' dis 1 plz continue 2 bump & light 2 dis hahaha
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Post by TreTru »

beat is sikk..

HOOK ..hahaha you know dass my shit..light it up..

loon i'm feelin ya angles ..flo is ridiculous as usual..
on point wit da concept..

2nd verse..strong on da Deliv as always..haha flo and presence on point..

3rd Verse..haha Crazy with the scheme..puke dat shit up..2 sik...

yeah this shit is dooope..you know i'm down with these...

haha feelin it all da way to the outro...good shit!!!
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Re: Light Dis Weed Up (Dr. GreenThumb) Ft. HKX & Viral

Post by Tha Q »

I used this beat before...it's slick

Good presence on track...

good rhyming


Solid joint
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