Just cruisin' - Need Honest feedback !!

[Kause mc]

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/the-s ... ml#p172691
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/lost- ... ml#p172692

I made this track for an internet mixtape. Nothin too big. But i really think this track is one of my best but really want sum GOOD feedback on it! 
The instrumental is not mine, its from chinggys song bagg up.

Im from australia so if theres any problem understanding lyrics, sorry in advance lol not the best mic either but other than that gimme sum feed, pointers, critisism anything u think. Ive heard nothin but good things come out of this track so far but from other mc's is a whole other world. U no wat im sayin haha

LinkVVVVV


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7tFuKQdp ... ata_player

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[Lawgix]

this is pretty sick man... like the beat dude... very west coast.... like the accent too kinda sounds nice to that west coast beat... good shit bro would like to hear the rest of the mixtape

[Kause mc]

Thanks lawgix hears a link for the rest of the tape except for track 6 http://m.youtube.com/#/view_playlist?p=5D094D916432BE19

Thanks for the feed fam!

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[complexity]

I'm definitely feeling the vibe on this.

Also upload an avatar!

[Kause mc]

Thanks plex. An avatar? I did it last week man lol but i sussed that post bout it. Will do asap man

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[TreTru]

haha..well the accent is a lil strong ..but like errybody said the vibe is cool..and im def into all the shit you were talkin about...hahaha..

good shit man..like i said sounds like ya might have somethin marketable for your area dude ...stay up

[Kause mc]

Thanks tre appreciate the feed!

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