F*ck Wit Me (Will you) - 1st Drop on iL

[Tha Q]

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10692128


This is not my usual style...I'm more of a concept rapper with an east-coast/underground flair...I wanted to experiment with a club-type track.

All feedback is appreciated.


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[Dos]

think ive seen your name before.. duno.
beats cool, got a huge energy/dance feel to it.
you came in almost to quite.. weird.
flow is smooth as hell though, an your presence n delivery is really nice.
not much i can say bad, for a club track its really nice. some of your ad libs are DOPE.. lol..i have a hard time making my ad libs sound like they should be there.
seems like your vocals are a tad low, maybe put the EQ up slightly. might be my headphones though, i duno.
hooks pretty cool.. sounds nice over the beat.
props on this track, its real solid. especially since this isn't your style.. keep at it.. you obviously know what your doing.

rtf: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/game- ... 22172.html

[pest]

not feelin it...really.
cant tell you if its not you or what cuz i didnt see anything else on your SC.

[CrashLandingMarz]

I can tell youre nice wit it, but Im not feelin this one that much bro. I mean nice punchlines, I just thought it could use a little more substance.Keep it up tho bro.