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karma vs. lil jay (battle)

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[LIL JAY’S VERSE]
karma hes a male model, for pervs weakly,in ever pic he gets fondled sneakily,
little weakling battling me what a shame, keep bringing my name up no fucking loyalty,
you act like a hyper midget on cocaine,i didnt think drag queens were considered royalty,
ill export this short genital wart carrying portarican bitch back to Spain,
they say KARMA’S a bitch “fuck that shit” karma’s bitch is a bitch,
“erica shes” so dumb she thinks her clit is a dick, fucking idiot just admit,
one day “he” will make a good wife, hes a sensitive little prick,
you’re so fucking retarded you tried to melt the sun with ice being dumb’s ur vice,
you’d try to stab me with a gun and shoot me with a knife,
at this rate youll still be a virgin at 41 admit it you have no life,
Karma’s the “sacrifice” ill put his soul closer to god like jesus christ,
fuck killing you with guns ill be spilling ur blood this verse is my device,
you just entise me to slice,chop and dice serve you up like Asian food with rice,
you have the face of toucan sam, ur mom as a baby auction you off put a sign up half price,
I had your girl wetter then the shores of Japan Sad thing is compared to you she’s more-of-a-man,
this stupid portarican even went to a bonfire held by the klu klux klan,
you remind me of a black hole in space the way you suck..DAMN,
if you wanted to blow up in the rap game should have joined the Taliban,
you couldn’t have a chance to win this even if you wished it from a genie,
i feel like im a ghost in this damn battle cause KARMA cant see me.




[KARMAS VERSE]
-the spark in your futures getting dim you cant win with weak fire kid/
-a cars running over you the way you seem “tired” bitch/
-your flow was decent in your days but now its expired spit/
-punchlines are bull’s shooting jay 23 times on his back to retire him/(jordan bulls 23)
-and that secures my entire win cus there no way your as nice as him/
-in the ring with karma?man i’ll take your life like your fighting grimm/(death/grim rapper)
-i’ll throw this lame leave him with an open brain i wont choke today/
-and im high as fuck rolling your verses cus im smoking jay/(his name)
-your verses?what is this lame saying lil jay im name slaying i aint playing/
-okay i admit i fucken lost this battle, naw im “jay” kaying/(jk,just kidding/lil “jay”)
-see in this battle your a runner up i’ll hit you with an upper cut/
-you guys gotta understand i could be jay,but i dont suck enough/(bj blow job his name jay)
-in this battle its his loss this bitch’s not sick?STOP!this prick got/
-beat with a pogo stick from the waist down but still aint “hip hop”!/
-this prick fuckers a dick sucker his shits gutter join my dead list buster/
-my competition is suppose to be a battler rapper, not taylor swifts brother/
-lil jay,jason rosenburg,jay, but i’ll sum it up and say you faggots all weak/
-im scoring verses the way im dunkin on jay like im chicagos basketball team/(bulls,jordan)
-you dont understand my bars jason its like you got crippled legs/(stand,disabled)
-i’ll beat this 6’5 foot giant down to bori’s size now call your self little jay/

(his favorite sport is basketball explains all the basketball lines
bori is a female emcee on this website (my16) who is 5’3 explains the last line)
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Re: karma vs. lil jay (battle)

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You want a vote... For a my16bars battle?.... Here is my vote:


IllestLyrics > my16bars
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Post by Meika »

why is there a battle from that place here ? tf get on some were you either join here and get with the buisness or leave, not bein a bitch but thats how i feel

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Re: karma vs. lil jay (battle)

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im trying to compare votes
from my16 compared to this site
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Re: karma vs. lil jay (battle)

Post by Alvin »

Karma wrote:im trying to compare votes
from my16 compared to this site
then go peep at our battle grounds, there are plenty of votes there to compare.

What your trying to do is see if you end up winning votes on this site as opposed to loosing on my16bars.

Truth is you KNOW the system and people here are better, therefore wasting time. Good luck getting legit votes for this battle.


p.s. stop forcing rhymes
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Re: karma vs. lil jay (battle)

Post by 32neilz »

Well here goes
flow: karma, a much nicer read, was well worded and put together, just a much easier flow to catch.
Punches: I'd say tie, both had some, and I'd say in equal amount.
Personals: I'd say karma due to the expos, but that shouldn't really count.
Multies: I'd say jay with the whole Asian rice thing.

Overall enjoyment tho hoes to karma, cleaner easier flow, nicer read.
If I was voting I'd vote karma

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