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You a fairy hoe, i masterd my monster i got my scary flow/
i rap the ones they oh arythematcally spittin binary code/
Fukk dora i swipe like swiper, no biter, iignite and light like lighter/
Keep Phat shit pushin in cyphers more then champion sumo fighters/
Im an atomic bomb, flowin death from the necronomicon/
The saunas on, these kats sweat, im blessed, the best phenominon/
For safety, keep the condom on cuz im fukkin the game nasty/
Bent over like a bitch quikk to get dikk n i dive in the ass cheeks/
Ya faggots rappin like last week, i rap back to the future/
Got the crack n it slaps like its super, dooper, factual trooper/
This bitches assume the position, im rude with the diction/
Consumed by the vision, slit ya wrist n ya doomed with incisions/
The razor blade you shave face with hits straight to the neck/
Blood spilt, im raising some heck when you play witta vet/
Watch me bounce em, The fakes gettin checked, call it an overdraft/
Ima million dollar menace when yall go for the cash...

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at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
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Post by Demo+ »

Alot Of Metas.. Couple Of Multies And Some Good Vocab Made This Piece Pretty Interestin To Read.. I Think You could've Add'd Some Harder Hittin Punches To Make It Even More Appealing But It Wasnt Bad At All As Is..


Good Job

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Post by Defiance »

liked it, good internal rhyming which sparks my interest and also holds good flow.. liked it man keep it coming
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