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Schemin On Tha Man That Birth'd Jay'z Pac N Biggie
Wit Ah' Crazy Plot Thats Gritty N Ah' K N Glock Committee
Yet His Lady God Damn Pretty Yea Maybe Not So City
Imma Lick Her Up Like Ah' Alchee
Beat It Up Like Im Rocky
Go Hard Kuz Im Cocky
Tell Her Im Ah' Artist N She Should Introduce Me To Papi
Now My Plans Comin Together
I Told Him Rappin In My Studios So Much Better
For Tha Money He Agreed So Stupid N Greedy
He Must Don't Know Makin Sulfuric Acid's Easy
I Doctor'd Tha Mic Like Jordan Gettin Stitches
Sniff Of This Poison His Organs'll Be Missin
Skin'll Start Fizzin As He Realize Its Acid
This Bastard Die In Fear.. Here Lies Ah' Classic
Wait'd Til He Came In Ready To Drop His Verse
Im Like Hurry Up N Die I Already Got Tha Hearse
As He Walk'd In Tha Booth My Ear Twitch'd
His Girl Gave Him Ah' Wink Im Like Yea Bitch!
He Took Ah' Deep Breath N Jus Start'd Spittin
Hes Scratchin His Chest Like His Hearts Itchin
Flinchin He Keep Goin Flowin N Showin Skill
He's Slowly Fill'd Wit Deaths Glowin Thrill
I Almost Scream'd As He Began Coughin
Its Finally Comin This Fucker Seein Ah' Coffin Droppin To His Knees His Girl Rush'd In
Blood Pour'd From His Eyes Yet Im Blushin
His Skin Slidin Off So Everyones Scared
He Yell'd In Agony I Knew His End was Near
As I Watch This Fucker Finally Die In Pain
I Smiled At Tha Fact I Jus Kill'd Tha Game....
But Its Not Over Yet Imma Have This Shit Gridlock'd
I'll Twist Tops Grip Glocks Til Tha Fall Of Hip Hop
I see what you did here..in the beginning the multi's seemed kinda Cam'ron-ish but then you started twisting shit up towards the end..honestly I thought this was going to be a boring piece..but after I understood what you were going for it sounded good...keep writing maaaan...oh..and you supposed to feed 2 pieces to get feed brah..but this is your freebie...
yo man im surprised by this shit, good flow, kinda a fast technique which was kicking to me. i liked the inards to the flow.. but hip hop never falls it just goes under ground
started of shaking but after reading the beginning it picked up... lines were cool.. sometimes rhymes felt forced but maybe its how im reading it - but it was a nice drop.. i like how u ended it - overall this is a good piece. keep writing
Thanks For Tha Feed.. It Helps me Elevate so Its Well Appreciated
And Sorry For Tha CamRon Flow In Tha Beginnin.. Ive Been Listenin To Dipset All Week.. I Be Chillin Wit This Harlem Chick So Yea.. Aye Yo MuMA
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