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Grim
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WHAT A NIGHT!!!

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I just awoke from a dream hearing Blood soaked screams
Found a machette by my bed next to mud soaked jeans.
My hands stained crimson my jacket was still wet
I saw my meds by the bed..I didn’t take my pills yet?
Damn…That’s the only thing that controls the beast..
That lurks under my skin and subdues the urge to feast
I hope I didn’t murder again in my sleep..
Go to the garage and see a garbage bag in the back of my jeep
Along with a shovel,two cinder blocks and a rope
A ski mask and two clips for my glock with the scope.
The silencer’s still attached so I check the chamber
No bullets missing..OK..so far no danger..
But then I look on the hood and there sits my bong
Along with some weed and shrooms i had scored from that actor Chong
I then remember asking him long how the buzz would last..VERY
So I open the garbage bag and it was just a bunch of rasberries!!
I must have got fucked up,got the munchies and went on a hunt
For berries..God Damn..No more putting shrooms in my blunts!!!!!!
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Good drop welcome back

8.5/10

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loved it dude, very descriptive very dark.. got me feeling all grim and shit
liked the muddy jeans line the most great opener man

feeling it, now you just gotta hit it in some audio
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am always diggin ya shit grimm thats ma man!

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haha love it
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