Misery loves Abundance

[Defiance]

darkness.. sparked from the recesses of light
successes and plights has got me obsessed with the night
i press for a fight but find myself facing me
chasing the same thing over and over like a vagrant disease
save me from me dont let me dwell in the dark
i fell to the sharks with chest pains cause im not well in my heart
i fell from the start with a promise to finish
im somber with dimness living dirty being dishonest to limits
i promised to give it but its hard to maintain
i do the same thangs expecting to see my lanes change
my main pain is this vicious cycle im stuck in
getting sucked in to a pattern of highs inside a drug binge
im plugged in but it seems like i've tuned out
i'll soon drown falling into a puddle from some doomed clouds
i resume doubt as soon as i pick up confidence
dropping it cause of late i've forgot where my options been
i pop a colotopin to numb away this pain inside
i blame the tides for tearing my life driving me insane wit might
my viens are tight pressing my beat into flesh
i cheating to death smoking stress as i beat my chest
i see my death coming from my own means
never home free cause the misery fucking owns me

[EcKsTaSy]

nice hit. one

[leeroi green]

yo i liked thiss from start to finish dope i rapped it out loud and my peoples lovved it as well keep doing ya thang big ups homie

[32neilz]

Def this was nice man, liked the multis that ended and began the lines, dope drop bro

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[Joe Saint]

this shit was dope i would give it 9/10

[Omnie]

As soon as I read the first bar, I hoped the flow would stay like that the whole way through and it did. Flow was dope, as well as the multies. They didn't seem forced. I like the concept and the personal aspect of it. Honestly, this is the first drop I've read from you and I enjoyed it. Good shit man...

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[Defiance]

thanks for the feed guys, still upping for some more, will be returned if link is left+

[Itz Nell]

nice post, multis seemed legit throughout, not forced, flow was ight, couple lines i didnt really like, but the majoity i enjoyed, kool concept to rap about, you stay with it, didnt go off topic which is good, keep it up

[MonuMental]

This shit was dope as fuck, man. It was deep and it flowed like a mothafuckin river. You got a knack for snappin. Props on this bruh, everything else has pretty well been covered by everyone else. Lol they thought it was dope too.

[COMPUTERCHIPS]

Very heartfelt piece. Shit was amazing! Really diggin this.

These bars were crazzzy!!

my main pain is this vicious cycle im stuck in
getting sucked in to a pattern of highs inside a drug binge
im plugged in but it seems like i've tuned out
i'll soon drown falling into a puddle from some doomed clouds
i resume doubt as soon as i pick up confidence
dropping it cause of late i've forgot where my options been

SICK!!!

Thanks for the drop. Really enjoyed reading
P E A C E

[MesaR]

yeah this pretty decent, the short structure kept the flow on point, everything was pretty solid, keep doing yo thing.