scott james vs j steel(Scott wins KO)

[Jsteel]

Ayt,house rules,no one under 50 posts must vote , 4 bars, no flips,crew votes to be broke down properly my check

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-- Wed May 11, 2011 1:31 am --

And 72 hours to drop,is that cool?

[ScottJames]

Blah, got tired of waiting... i think i did 5 bars, so you do 5 as well...anyway....

here's your death:


When TALKIN TEXT, SCOTT IS BEST! So Hot, I 'Melt Steel' Wit LAVA BREATH...
Equipped Wit ROCKET TEKS So Best Keep An "Eye Out For Me" Like BIN LADENS DEATH!!
(they shot him in the eye)
Im OFF TO SET Ya COFFINS BED, Ill Make This MAN WOOZY Wen I Grip N CLAP UZI'S..
U A WACK NEWBIE, We All Know "STEELS A Failure" And I Talkin Bout The SHAQ MOVIE!!
U CANT MOVE ME!! So The HELL WIT THIS GUY SEE, Ur Soft, Like MELTIN SOME ICECREAM
Imma Hard Hitter So Ill "Steel Yer/Steeler Head Off" Like When HELMETS GO FLYING!!
Ur MELON IM SLICING!! U Cant HAVE MY BELT Cuz Like Cancer, I DAMAGE HEALTH..
U FAST WITH STEALTH? U Wouldnt Be The "Man Of Steel" If U Was SUPERMAN HIMSELF!!
Ur WACK AS HELL So Fuck This LAME ROOK, Watch His Brain Drain As I SLANG HOOKS..
HEY LOOK! J SHOOK! So We Know He'll Jus Choke Cuz "Steels A Joke" Like DANE COOK!!
(Dane Cook steels jokes)

[Jsteel]

ok...ima post my verse line by line due to my phone not having space ....AHEM

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-- Fri May 13, 2011 11:34 pm --

He became a SCOTch... this DRUNK- FOOL-SPITS like a dying~Raped ~g (A weak person) You are WHAT-YOU-DRINK (like the saying,you are what you eat)//

-- Fri May 13, 2011 11:41 pm --

Only time you'll ANNAILATE~ME (A nair late,nair is my surname ) is when I ARRIVE~LATE~KID

-- Fri May 13, 2011 11:45 pm --

//Cuz i got DRUNK-OFF-SCOTCH, I DRIVE~PAIN ~IN, BY~BLADES~WHICH are MUCH-MORE-DARK

-- Fri May 13, 2011 11:55 pm --

//I drink him like a VAMP-IRE, till hes empty, his soul left -him hes DAMNED-DYIN, bottle is empty

-- Sat May 14, 2011 12:01 am --

//Im SPILLING ~BLOOD spit a tsunami to the beggar Hard HITTING~STUFF like when your bitch im sexxing.

-- Sat May 14, 2011 12:12 am --

/I just WAVE-BYE ,then it lifts up the GRAVE-SITE, Drowning SEAttle (he stays in seattle) like a fish pulled backwards (fish die when pulled backwards,sorta drown) drizzle then my heavy rain fights

-- Sat May 14, 2011 12:17 am --

//Hes too small to see,an IN-SIG-NIFICANT BEING, i Lift a finger and END-THIS-BITCHES STREAK(Wins)

-- Sat May 14, 2011 12:24 am --

//This Leprecahn with a GOLD-TITLE gets frac tured, by me STEELing VOTES-RIGHTLY mine, as im Shatterin the rain bow like wearing a sunny tie in this battle,hes worthless,a blunt knife,a pointless rapper

-- Sat May 14, 2011 12:35 am --

SCOTTS -EMULSION (a kids health syrup ,help them grow ) helps kids grow, likes them on TOP-IN-TOUCHING like jAckson(michael) yo steals boys virginity (jack son or rob son ,get it? )

-- Sat May 14, 2011 12:35 am --

SCOTTS -EMULSION (a kids health syrup ,help them grow ) helps kids grow, likes them on TOP-IN-TOUCHING like jAckson(michael) yo steals boys virginity (jack son or rob son ,get it? )

-- Sat May 14, 2011 12:39 am --

I leave burns-Physicaly,breathe a hurt-Degree ya an eskimo IN~HERE your peace cursed-wizardly , magic as i make you DISA~PPEAR made no impact here. your remembered vividly

-- Sat May 14, 2011 12:39 am --

I leave burns-Physicaly,breathe a hurt-Degree ya an eskimo IN~HERE your peace cursed-wizardly , magic as i make you DISA~PPEAR made no impact here. your remembered vividly

-- Sat May 14, 2011 12:40 am --

im done.uppin for votes

[Alvin]

Alright... no point in being around the bush.


Scott took this with ease.

U Wouldnt Be The "Man Of Steel" If U Was SUPERMAN HIMSELF!!

Out of all his loss's i think that's the first time i hear the superman reference. Dopest insult in my opinion... you entire drop was nice. The finish line with Dane Cook was good wording, but almost felt like a drake punchline lol. which reminds me, why does Drake have his own punchline?



Jsteel...

You definitely upped your game, and made it a little easier with line by line drop... but you have to watch out how many times you press submit lol... and although you went line for line, hop on a computer and see the structure man, scotts is a perfect example of what you should be doing... In the simple way...


xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fool/

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Tool/


line 1 ends with fool, line to with tool. You have some crazy stretched lines man... and some of them don't even rhyme with each other.

until you take this serious -> http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/text- ... t3038.html no one will take you serious.

It's a disadvantage that your on a celly, but not that much of a disadvantage. Read the text 101 man, drop better.



My vote should be obvious but here it is in bright pink.


MVGT Scott

[Ambiguous Realm]

i compiled jsteels verse so i could read it easier in a notepad, (removed the repeated entrees as well)

anyways... steel u got the concept of it all, u just need to structure your lines better, i hate seeing guys lose every battle their in, i'm sure its discouraging as hell, but problem might just be you're facing opponents like scottjames which have been doing this much longer than you, try to see what your opponents did to win, then learn from that, also i don't know where you're from but there's some lines that just didn't really rhyme all that well

this was a cat sweep to SJ

vote:scottjames

[Omnie]

^^^ what they said...

Jsteel: Work on ya structure...you got the basics down...flow is ok...practice, practice, practice...

+1 SJ

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[Alvin]

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Scott James wins KO