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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YnilceL4FwU[/video]

Never did I think I'd be relevent, but certainly theres evidence
that stays like the resin when the pipe isn't blessed or cleansed
I been where the peasants been, been there without further measurements
of where the endless head will ever be grasped but that's further evidence
that if I took time I might present a gem, to shine like it's heaven sent
now grasp the light I presented them, let it glow like a honored medal when
set into the ground with soldiers who are now being heaven sent
I felt like was imperfection then, I guessed again when my presence sensed
a lesson when life seemed so tough that my heart would lessen then...
my heart broke then blessed with sense, I picked myself up and read again
retraced my steps and re-evaluated what I seemed to repress within
now my image is as limitless as the man who went against the press again
or shot at the president and left him in awe cause he missed his sentencin'
escaped and ran away from the public eye, fuck it, I, feel revived
but amongst this great divide I must find my voice and disregard "try"
I must do, like the pages that left the library and never came back used
if my words confuse, then I must re-align what was once a truce
re-create what I once abused, and ellude the allure of my own recluse...
so with my own imperfection comes correction, ready to be erected
just so my own coming can be ejected, the next day I could reset it
connect with my faults, return the same time and use the time and recollect it
if you objected it's cuz you fear the fact I have become re-connected
though my thoughts seem selective and my selections some indirected
you still get the message as soon as the page reloads and the shots start sparkin'
I'm so ahead of son, Thomas Edison with the thoughts yours is mirages
pyramids dusted off that fall apart when time has taken it's part in
so if my thoughts is parted I might come off as a genius amongst Nostradamus
or maybe a Spartan, maybe history gots me twisted and I might've lost it
or maybe I'm just getting my feet wet in the Milky Way where stars have fallen
if you fear the comment then you might as well fear the future I'm startin'
if I were to have the moment I might have to remove all that's carved in
and remove myself from the place I have become fond of.....
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Re: Therapy

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my man, i love your shit, always inviting me in.. you allways on that elevating tip.. getting better and better..
keep it coming man
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Re: Therapy

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gracias senor :)
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Re: Therapy

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Yo.. Tha Way You Put Tha Instrumental In Was Good For You.. Everytime I Seen Someone Attempt That Idea It Was Trash Or Off Key Due To Their Crazy Accent Or Something. So Where You From


Anyways.. Cool Drop.. A Lil Deep But Tha Multies And Metaphors Made It A Lil Interesting.. I'd say Jus Work On Addin More Multies Thru out Tha Bar Wen Its That Long..



Keep Perfecting Ya Style And Drop More Shit


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Thanx peeps

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