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QwarterZ
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Corrupted

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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z2osteulV00[/video]

Trapped in the infinite I couldn't find my limits with
a ignant bitch did what a infant did
now picture this, if the world surrounded this image
this image fits into a newer description with
twisted sentences, twirled up into this abyss
which is, located near the depths of patheticness
forget it then, let me try to relocate, then again
let me recreate the passage and possibly try to begin again

Modern Juliet, for whom we met, where and do begin
friends and truly then, we shook hands for the amuse-e-ment
review again the fact I never really knew who this is
but the abuse begins hearts break, its either you or his
so descriptive, encrypted in the newest bliss, do it then
shoot him in, swoop him in your ride, then do as if
I never knew the picture would be, drawn, subdued to this
now it's due again, the patience is bleedin' abused till thin
traces, trace the faces, makes a perfect resentment, replacement
say it, isn't so, but try to say that I wasn't amazing with
the time that split the middle, carved upon the statue you committed
fiddled with emotions, fitted it upon your brow, though it's sentimental
I never cared for sentiment, but fell to my own lies I tried fittin' in
did too little, or too much just to play the man that's in the middle
or maybe I was placed in the riddle, decipher the project without prospect
forgettin' which is honest, or no longer regardin' what was once progress
regardless my guard is, up a little now I can't commit to this arson
burnin' bridges just so she could top this, or maybe not just thoughtless
beggin' to differ, because the difference is what was once pompous
becomes lost with the thought that you once thought was more then hearts twist
-ed up into another mongomous, maybe not, maybe I'm just becoming heartless
knowing I have another but wanted what I wanted and can no longer drop it
but with these moments I become lost in, it hardens the fact I'm not him
forgotten, but maybe not, maybe I'm just figuring out what I lost then
and now this is the moment where I'm back, back again in full force and...
will no longer let my emotions toy with what I was once the boss in...
forget it....this whole new chapter I'm writing is just startin'.......
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Re: Corrupted

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Sick as shit and I relate directly because I'm goin through that right now. Excellent piece, bruh. Nuff said.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
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Re: Corrupted

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DOPE... I was diggin the flow hard as fuck like fa real, and the descriptive feel you gave to the song and relationship within it was pretty sick. I want the audio version fa real.

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